Colleen’s alternative poetry challenge NaNoWriMo is running: giving us a pair of words and for us to then use not them, but synonyms in our poems!
This weeks words to switch are~:
Autumn & Leaves
I used Indian summer, and fall for autumn and farewell and foliage for leaves, within a tanka.
Indian summer
I bid you a fond farewell
For winter is here
The gold foliage of fall
Gives way to cold, bare winterRitu 2017
willowdot21
Nov 09, 2017 @ 10:04:27
Beautiful Sis 💜💖
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Nov 08, 2017 @ 21:09:34
Lovely poetry! 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 08, 2017 @ 21:13:26
Thank you xx
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Nov 08, 2017 @ 21:20:29
🌻xo
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Jennie
Nov 07, 2017 @ 22:56:14
Beautiful!
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Ritu
Nov 08, 2017 @ 06:43:33
Thank you so much Jennie!
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Jennie
Nov 08, 2017 @ 19:00:06
You’re welcome, Ritu!
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dornahainds
Nov 07, 2017 @ 22:13:28
Stellar scene! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 22:53:36
Thanks!
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robbiesinspiration
Nov 07, 2017 @ 18:30:05
Very clever indeed, Ritu.
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 18:44:41
Thanks Robbie xxx
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Judy E Martin
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:51:44
Oh how beautiful, Sis 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:57:15
Thank you sis! Xxxx
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OIKOS™-Redaktion
Nov 07, 2017 @ 16:35:11
Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Colleen Chesebro
Nov 07, 2017 @ 16:32:58
Ritu, I’m really taken with your word choice. I love how descriptive your poetry becomes. Well done. ❤
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:54:55
Thank you so much Colleen! 💜 I enjoyed writing this!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Nov 07, 2017 @ 15:32:09
Fine job
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:53:23
Thanks Annette! 💜
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Erika Kind
Nov 07, 2017 @ 15:17:46
Exactly what happens this week… brrr!
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:52:53
It is really cold! My car was iced over yesterday!
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Erika Kind
Nov 07, 2017 @ 19:39:22
We had such low temperatures too lately. It is warming up a little bit. But that means 3 – 4 degrees… lol! At least it was sunny again today!!
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Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 19:56:57
Brrrr!
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Erika Kind
Nov 07, 2017 @ 20:00:19
Yep 😬
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