Charli’s prompt this week:
May 3, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) use a line in your story. You can think of the variation of the word meaning, or you can think of visual references. Go where the prompt leads.
Lines
“Here’s ten pence.”
“Sorry, do I know you?”
“Call your mum. Tell her you’re not coming home.”
“What?”
“You must be so tired.”
“Huh?”
“Because you’ve been running through my dreams all night.”
“Just stop.”
“I seem to have lost my phone number. Can I have yours?”
“Seriously?”
“Kiss me if I’m wrong, but dinosaurs still exist, right?”
“Oh God!”
“Can I follow you home? Cause my parents always told me to follow my dreams.”
“You know, if you’d just asked me out, I’d have probably said yes. But after those cheesy pick-up lines, I really don’t think so!”
https://carrotranch.com/2018/05/04/may-3-flash-fiction-challenge/
But I Smile Anyway... 
May 23, 2018 @ 11:22:23
Lol, I enjoyed this so much ^_^ nice work
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May 23, 2018 @ 11:34:51
Thanks!
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May 11, 2018 @ 02:13:42
Bhahahahaha! That was brilliant, Ritu! ❤ Now, how did you get the cute GIF above? ❤
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May 11, 2018 @ 05:48:17
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May 11, 2018 @ 14:47:33
https://gph.is/22QcxUi
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May 11, 2018 @ 15:52:19
I got the link rather than the gif… but I found it and it’s so cute!
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May 11, 2018 @ 17:58:33
Well crap! I’ll try again. 😀 I did the social link this time.
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May 11, 2018 @ 18:33:04
It worked! And you can do that in a post too!!!
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May 11, 2018 @ 19:45:38
OH, that’s so cool!!! Thank you! ❤
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May 11, 2018 @ 05:48:56
I used Giphy! The social embed link worked a treat!
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May 11, 2018 @ 14:46:14
How cool. I will try that! 😀 Thanks for the tip. ❤
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May 11, 2018 @ 15:51:25
😊
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May 10, 2018 @ 03:24:19
Ritu, this reads like a train ready to derail on these tired lines! Great dialog to make this cheese pop as a flash.
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May 10, 2018 @ 05:49:45
Cheesy chat up lines were the first thing that came to mind when I read your prompt, and then made me reminisce about the times I was approached in bars and clubs at University. Of course no one was that persistant, to use all those lines at once, but there were a few good tries!!! 😀
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May 15, 2018 @ 02:25:25
Did you ever think you’d use them one day, lol?
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May 15, 2018 @ 05:56:15
HA! No, I didn’t ! This was many years before my literary dreams became apparent! And now I know, everything we experience becomes fodder… for our writing!
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May 07, 2018 @ 09:50:11
Full marks for sheer determination and pig-headedness 🙂
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May 07, 2018 @ 10:00:36
Ha Ha!!!
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May 06, 2018 @ 21:29:29
Persistent and creative even if the lines are cheesy! -Molly Stevens
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May 06, 2018 @ 11:43:16
Lol! What a coincidence, I also went to a dating scene for my ‘lines’ flash:)
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May 05, 2018 @ 22:06:48
Watch out Casanova!!
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May 05, 2018 @ 22:32:36
Ha Ha!!!
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May 05, 2018 @ 23:51:27
😁
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May 05, 2018 @ 18:50:55
Too funny. 😎🥀
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May 05, 2018 @ 18:51:21
Glad to make you giggle!
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May 05, 2018 @ 07:46:33
“Can I follow you home? Cause my parents always told me to follow my dreams.”
😉
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May 05, 2018 @ 08:05:54
HA ha! True cheese factor Michael!! 😉
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May 05, 2018 @ 09:06:06
😉 But great Ritu!
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May 05, 2018 @ 09:07:27
😀
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May 05, 2018 @ 07:45:05
Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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May 05, 2018 @ 03:36:12
This is a classic case of “line maro-ing” as we would call it in our college days. 🙂 🙂
Trying to hit on someone in a cheesy way!!
Funny !!
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May 05, 2018 @ 08:01:38
Total Line Maro-ing!!!!
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May 05, 2018 @ 13:45:45
🙂 🙂
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May 04, 2018 @ 21:45:15
;>) Pick-up lines that bad should result in capital punishment.
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May 04, 2018 @ 21:57:38
They really should 😅
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May 04, 2018 @ 20:47:16
Hahaha! XD
Those lines were really bad!
Nice read! 🙂
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May 04, 2018 @ 21:22:50
Totally awful!!! 😂
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May 04, 2018 @ 20:00:53
hahaha! 😀 love this!
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May 04, 2018 @ 20:09:17
Glad you liked it! I messaged you via your contact me page with a tanka… xxx
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:50:54
I love this piece
Real strong images
Sheldon
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May 04, 2018 @ 20:10:25
Thanks Sheldon a
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:07:59
There is a commercial on an Austrian radio station which also comes with such stupid chat-up lines… lol!
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:10:45
I think the funniest time I had was in my first year at uni when a guy, some overseas from India student came up to me and said ” I didn’t know how to fly until I saw you!” It’s not even a line!! Made no sense! I cracked up in his face, and laughed with my friends for ages! The poor guy was so embarrased…!
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:28:04
Haha.. the poor boy. Sounds like he got totally lost in poetry with you on his mind… lol!
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:29:55
Lol! Nah, just tried to learn some lines that he totally messed up!!!
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:30:43
LOL… that’s really funny 😅
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:42:58
😂😂
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:00:58
Very funny!
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May 04, 2018 @ 19:02:47
Thank you!
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