Charli’s prompt this week:
August 16, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a comet. You can consider how it features into a story, influences a character, or creates a mood. Go where the prompt leads.
Heavenly Calling
It was 1910. She was ten. She’d often sit on her windowsill, legs dangling, staring out at the stars. That night, she’d seen something different, a ball of light travelling through the sky.
Haley’s Comet.
She never expected to see that in her lifetime again, and yet here she was, in 1986, eyes trained on the stars, with her ten-year-old granddaughter for company.
A ball of light flashed through the sky. Doris smiled and sat back.
“I saw it! Did you see it? Gramma!! Did you see it?” Rosie turned to her grandma.
Gramma sat, eyes closed, at peace.
https://carrotranch.com/2018/08/16/august-16-flash-fiction-challenge/
But I Smile Anyway... 
Sep 26, 2018 @ 00:52:50
Hey Ritu, an old post but… I love it! Great writing! ❤ xxxx
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Sep 26, 2018 @ 06:54:39
Thanks 😍
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Sep 03, 2018 @ 04:18:46
https://themidnightweaver.wordpress.com
This is my attempt at a horror story!
please give it a read and subscribe!
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Sep 02, 2018 @ 00:42:33
I loved your 100 word flash fiction story. The ending well thought out. Every word had a purpose. Loved it! I’m going it a try at 100 word flash fiction stories. I’ve been writing 1,000 flash fictions thus far.
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Sep 02, 2018 @ 09:01:36
Thank you. It’s amazing what you can portray in such few words…
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 00:40:56
Touching story
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Aug 20, 2018 @ 12:24:59
Awesome, what an ending.
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Aug 20, 2018 @ 12:28:16
Thanks Anurag 🙂
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Aug 19, 2018 @ 09:49:33
Ooooh, very poignant, Ritu.
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Aug 19, 2018 @ 09:53:26
Thank you Robbie. The ending wasn’t planned like that but it just happened…!
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 07:01:52
Nice take Sis, peaceful and lovely ending.💜
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 09:22:25
Thank you sis 😍
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 12:52:28
💜💜
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 20:28:47
What a lovely take, sis. Very touching!
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 20:33:37
Thank you sis 💜
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 20:36:20
💖 💖
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 18:45:07
Oh we all have to go somehow and that sounds like a magical way to go.
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 19:57:30
I thought so soon Marje 💖
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 18:11:47
Awe. What a Wonderful story. 🥀
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 18:16:50
Thank you Dorna 💖
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 17:26:07
Oh, wow, I didn’t expect that ending, and yet what a peaceful and spectacular way to go. Good one, Reena!
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 17:45:31
Thank you Charli! I’ll answer to Reena if you want 😜
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 15:36:51
Oh, no!!! I feel like the mom who just called one of her kids by a siblings name!!! 😜
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 15:41:25
Ha ha!!! I’ve been called worse Charli! Don’t worry 😂
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 15:55:50
🤐
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 14:36:59
You are the Queen of the surprise endings… awesome
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 17:03:13
That is so lovely of you to say sis 😍
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 14:06:05
Really touching story Sister 💜
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 17:01:54
Thank you 😍
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Aug 18, 2018 @ 04:21:27
You’re welcome 😊
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 10:07:53
Uplifting and carefully consructed. Very nice Ritu.
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 10:26:57
Thank you Ellen 😍
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:54:04
Beautiful and heartwarming ❤
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:54:55
Thank you 😊
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:52:16
Beautiful short piece. Nicely written. G:)
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:53:51
Thank you G 😊
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 08:59:16
It’s beautiful ! The way you write can inspire a lot of people.Keep up with the good work
Hope u like my work too .Feel free to access it :
https://natesh557112956.wordpress.com/2018/08/16/youre-under-arrest
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:51:22
Thank you Natasha 😁
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 08:54:10
Wow heart melting ♥
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 09:51:05
Thank you 💖
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 08:35:22
Such a lovely bittersweet moment. This is wonderful!
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Aug 17, 2018 @ 08:40:08
Thank you So much Barb! ❤
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