Colleen’s tanka challenge, as always includes the premise that only synonyms for the prompt words must be used…
This week, the words were;
Sad & Write

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Morose feelings
Marking, scribing, bleeding
Heartbeat dripping over pages
LetterRitu 2018
Aug 29, 2018 @ 00:57:54
Wow! A letter to remember. Powerful words, Ritu. β€
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Aug 29, 2018 @ 08:22:14
Thanks Olga ππ
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Aug 28, 2018 @ 14:04:42
Great post! Keep it up!
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Aug 28, 2018 @ 14:25:41
Thanks π
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Aug 23, 2018 @ 22:12:21
Very moving!
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Aug 24, 2018 @ 07:44:43
Thank yoi
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Aug 22, 2018 @ 18:22:34
I think these are difficult to write, Ritu, and this one is excellent.
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Aug 22, 2018 @ 18:46:00
Thank you so much Robbie π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 20:19:31
Extremely wonderfully done, sis!
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 20:28:47
Thank you sis π
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Aug 22, 2018 @ 19:09:02
You are welcome π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:55:36
Well done!
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 20:27:53
X π X thank you
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Aug 22, 2018 @ 01:44:52
Youβre welcome! π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 18:59:36
An emotion so deep, a letter is a good place for it. Well done, Ritu!
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:01:31
Thank you Miriam π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 20:55:55
You’re welcome, Ritu. β€ π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:05:38
Beautiful Sis full of emotions ππ
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:33:10
Thank you π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 15:06:07
Love it!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:32:38
Thank you xx
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 14:55:09
A lovely cinquain that really expresses the sadness in a letter. Well done, Sis. And you’re on holiday too! β€
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:31:42
Thank you sis π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 17:12:20
Always. π β€
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 14:20:44
Brought out my inner wounded self…
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:27:13
Ouch…
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 14:06:09
You’re good Sister!
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:27:04
Aw thanks Brother π
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 16:27:50
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 12:00:58
Very soulful, Ritu.
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Aug 21, 2018 @ 12:08:20
Thanks Steve π
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