March 14: Flash Fiction Challenge – Chisel #CarrotRanch

Charli’s Carrot Ranch Fiction prompt this week.

March 14, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a chisel. Use chisel as a noun or a verb. Think about what might be chiseled, who is chiseling. Be the chisel. Go where the prompt leads!

Drop Dead Gorgeous
All the ladies stopped what they were doing and stared.
Zeus sighed. He was used to it.
No matter where he went, the first sight of his chiselled features always rendered the opposite sex speechless.
His mates would often comment jealously about his ability to have any woman he wanted, falling at his feet.
But it’s not all it’s made out to be, being drop dead gorgeous.
A mute partner, who is always staring at him gormlessly, falling at the sight of him, or even dropping dead on occasion…
Not quite the kind of relationship he was looking for.

33 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Charli Mills
    Mar 20, 2019 @ 02:19:19

    Hard to be Zeus! What a fun take on the prompt (and great use of the word “gormlessly”).

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  3. robbiesinspiration
    Mar 19, 2019 @ 04:34:47

    Oh Ritu, this is so funny. Well done.

    Liked by 1 person


  4. Jennie
    Mar 18, 2019 @ 13:43:41

    And dropping dead, no less. This was a great take on the chisel prompt, Ritu. 😀

    Liked by 1 person


  5. anuragbakhshi
    Mar 18, 2019 @ 09:27:38

    Ha ha ha, poor guy…I mean God!

    Liked by 2 people


  6. papershots
    Mar 18, 2019 @ 09:03:47

    Haha! Love it. Great take on the prompt!

    Liked by 1 person


  7. syl65
    Mar 16, 2019 @ 22:01:22

    Poor Zeus, the looks that kill 😄

    Liked by 1 person


  8. Erika Kind
    Mar 16, 2019 @ 21:53:28

    Haha, love it, sis 😄

    Liked by 1 person


  9. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Mar 16, 2019 @ 15:28:04

    hubba, hubba zoot suit!

    Liked by 1 person


  10. Michael Ogazie
    Mar 16, 2019 @ 11:06:15

    Reblogged this on Micworldwide.

    Liked by 1 person


  11. TanGental
    Mar 16, 2019 @ 00:05:06

    Ha dropping dead too. That power. Never had it… thank heavens

    Liked by 1 person


  12. Susan Zutautas
    Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:49:55

    Great take on the prompt!

    Liked by 1 person


  13. johnrieber
    Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:49:24

    Nice job! I added my story on the challenge page as well!

    Liked by 1 person


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