Colleen’s Poetry Challenge:
A beautiful dawn
I can hear the bird's chorus
The sun is shining
A perfect start to the day
Bringing a bounce to my step
Ritu 2019
19 Mar 2019 34 Comments
in #ColleensWeeklyPoetryChallenge Tags: #ColleensWeeklyPoetryChallenge, Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, Colleen Chesebro, Spring and Sing, tanka
Colleen’s Poetry Challenge:
A beautiful dawn
I can hear the bird's chorus
The sun is shining
A perfect start to the day
Bringing a bounce to my step
Ritu 2019
H.R.R. Gorman
Mar 25, 2019 @ 13:19:11
Ooh, clever synonym for spring. And so proper for the season!
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Ritu
Mar 25, 2019 @ 19:15:05
Glad you liked it!
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Colleen Chesebro
Mar 24, 2019 @ 16:09:32
Oh, Ritu… this is such a lovely Spring poem. I feel that spring in my step!! ❤
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Ritu
Mar 24, 2019 @ 16:10:35
Thank you sis! And we have a true spring day here today too!
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Colleen Chesebro
Mar 24, 2019 @ 16:35:55
I’m waiting. I’ve been having problems living in this high elevation. We’re moving to Albuquerque, NM as soon as possible. It’s about 280 miles further south, which means warmer. I’m so ready. LOL. ❤
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Ritu
Mar 24, 2019 @ 17:21:34
I’ll bet you are 💜
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Colleen Chesebro
Mar 24, 2019 @ 18:21:22
It hasn’t been fun – health wise. On Friday, my hubs looks at me and says, “It’s time to move. It’s been fun by we’re moving on.” ❤
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Ritu
Mar 24, 2019 @ 20:39:44
I hope you find the perfect place sis! ❤
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Colleen Chesebro
Mar 24, 2019 @ 20:46:59
Fingers crossed. ❤
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Mar 23, 2019 @ 22:13:18
Very lovely Ritu. 🙂
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Ritu
Mar 23, 2019 @ 22:14:48
Thanks Marje 💜
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Vashti Q
Mar 22, 2019 @ 19:21:49
Lovely Tanka, Ritu it’s very cheerful. I love the synonyms you chose. ❤ xo
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Ritu
Mar 22, 2019 @ 19:45:47
I’m glad you liked it!
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robbiesinspiration
Mar 21, 2019 @ 15:41:34
Spring certainly brings happiness and joy.
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Ritu
Mar 21, 2019 @ 17:59:37
Oh it does!
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Erika Kind
Mar 20, 2019 @ 15:39:59
It is so wonderful again, isn’t it?
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 18:18:30
It’s getting there!!!
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Erika Kind
Mar 20, 2019 @ 19:50:17
A good feeling to see nature getting back in its full power slowly.
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 19:51:28
Definitely x
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Erika Kind
Mar 20, 2019 @ 19:52:54
🐤
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Mar 20, 2019 @ 13:13:32
I’ll take this walk with you!
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 18:03:35
I’d welcome your company sis 💜
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syl65
Mar 20, 2019 @ 00:25:08
Always a great way to start any day Sister ❤
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 07:01:14
A beautiful start!!! ❤️
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syl65
Mar 20, 2019 @ 12:44:17
Totally Sister ❤️
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willowdot21
Mar 19, 2019 @ 22:47:18
Beautiful Sis 💜💜
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 07:01:30
Thanks sis 💜
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D. Wallace Peach
Mar 19, 2019 @ 22:36:37
Lovely one, Ritu. I love how happy this is. 🙂
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 07:01:53
I was definitely feeling sunny as I wrote this ☀️
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BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com
Mar 19, 2019 @ 22:34:19
Such a Spring in your step kinda rhythm going there. I love this!! 😊
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 07:02:08
Glad you enjoyed! Thank you ☀
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Ethan Dale Eagar
Mar 19, 2019 @ 21:37:56
Wonderful poem! A fitting tribute to Spring!
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Ritu
Mar 19, 2019 @ 21:39:14
Thank you Ethan!!!
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