It’s Colleen’s Tanka Challenge! Of course, just providing a couple of words would be far too simple, so we have two words, yes, but we can’t use them! Only synonyms allowed! Except it’s the first challenge of the month so Colleen allows poets to choose their own two words to use in a syllabic poem.
I chose to write an Etheree using Write & Story as they are apt for my personal challenge this month, to edit my story to as perfect as I can! #RiNoEdMo
Write
Edit
Create worlds
Use colourful
Imagination
To transport your reader
To a place they've never been
Just scribe a story so intense
The pages almost turn by themselves
Pulling readers deeper into your tale
Ritu 2019
Aug 12, 2019 @ 16:48:45
Ah yes, I can relate. Nice one:)
Pat
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Aug 12, 2019 @ 17:22:05
Thank you!
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 22:57:22
What an inspiring Etheree, Sis. It’s every author’s dream! LOL! ❤
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 22:57:46
It’s definitely mine sis! Thank you 🥰
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 23:27:11
Oh, my gosh… I know. It a chore and a half. LOL!
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 23:29:32
🥰
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 17:37:57
Lovely Ritu and very inspiring.. ♥
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Aug 09, 2019 @ 17:39:36
Thank you Sally 🥰
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 19:14:12
A good story does have this effect. I am sure, your WIP has that potential 😉
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 19:19:48
I sure hope so Sis!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 19:44:42
👍
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 21:04:21
I totally agree to Erika, Sis! Always i am looking again into “RITUals” i get fascinated like during the first reading. Michael
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 21:20:39
Thank you Bro 🥰
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 22:15:31
My pleasure, and its the truth too, Sis!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:50:11
Love this Sis 💜
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:59:22
Thank you sis 🥰
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:10:42
Yay! So inspirational!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:21:13
Hope it inspires many!!!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:04:12
Definitely the dream of all writers Sister 💜
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:10:19
Isn’t it just Brother!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:35:10
Yes!!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 15:36:18
😉
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 09:57:25
As you said in the poem, transport your reader……flash! I´m transported to your words, and by the way the what you wrote earlier about hope&change is really up to you (paraphrasing here) couldn´t agree more. But now that I think of it, Obama used those two what seems simple words and stuck into people´s minds. Quite clever and people…… we are suckers. Anyways, not to get into politics but I did, nice reading of the poem as always.
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 10:28:29
Thanks Charly! No thing political about me!!!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 08:32:45
Should be a poster hanging in every writer’s office/writing space
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 08:46:39
Ooh! I like that thought!!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 06:41:44
You mean to say you have no hope for the future that you can write a story about.
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 08:46:14
Not at all. I mean to say a write can create hope!
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 05:34:08
The perfect book
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 08:45:20
Truly 💓📚
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 05:01:56
I have no idea what this all means
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Aug 08, 2019 @ 08:45:11
The poem or the challenge?
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