24 Nov 2020 32 Comments
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Colleen’s Syllabic poetry challenge!
clouds cover the moon,
beyond dawn's pale horizon
sun rises unseen
©2020 Sue Vincent
Here's my take:
Truth is never hidden
Eventually, you'll see
Reality bites
Ritu 2020
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Nov 29, 2020 @ 09:37:03
There’s no hiding behind the moon! Lovely one, Ritu. 🙂
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Nov 29, 2020 @ 10:13:45
Thank you Sis 🥰
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Nov 27, 2020 @ 09:59:41
A lovely Haiku. 🙂
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Nov 27, 2020 @ 17:58:53
Thank you 😊
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 21:44:36
Sis, this is a fabulous haiga senryu!! I love the truth in your words. Very creative. ❤
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 21:49:09
Thank you Sis 🥰🥰🥰
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 21:50:05
So welcome. See, you still got it! 😀 ❤
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 21:50:53
I was scared I’d lost it!
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 21:53:03
It gets like that sometimes. I’m so stressed right now. I’m bad company and can’t seem to put my feelings into words. That doesn’t happen often. Sometimes we just have to wait for the words to come to us. ❤
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 22:11:06
It took me 3 months to write any words, sis 😳
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 22:51:35
You were burned out. I feel that for the first time, ever. I’m trying to pace myself but sometimes that doesn’t help either. Give yourself a break. Now, if I can take my own advice! 🤦🏼♀️❤️
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Nov 27, 2020 @ 07:23:42
I know, Sis. This time I had no choice. I couldn’t work, look after family, and write. It had to take a back step
Because the first two were essential…
You take care, sis 🥰
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Nov 27, 2020 @ 13:33:25
I don’t know how you do it all, Sis. Hugs and lots of love to you. ❤️
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Nov 27, 2020 @ 17:59:25
🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 12:52:11
A nice twist on the theme, Ritu 🙂
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 17:41:18
Thank you so much Sue! It was after a long while that I wrote poetry!
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 19:18:28
But took to it like a duck to water. 🙂
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 19:23:18
Back where I belong ❤
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Nov 26, 2020 @ 19:35:11
🙂
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 14:05:33
Fantastic response,Sis! AND:
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you will have time on the evening to cele-
brate great love!
Best wishes, MIchael
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 18:20:16
Thank you Bro!
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 01:28:44
I see where you took this…
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 06:29:35
It was just what came to mind, thinking of a hidden moon…
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 21:34:59
Nicely response. Like it.
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 21:37:07
Thank you 🙂
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 20:59:53
Beautiful, so well put in so few words 💜💜
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 21:07:10
Thank you, Sis ❤
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 21:08:32
💜💜
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 20:33:08
That’s an interesting interpretation and “answer” to Sue’s prompt haiku. I like the message in your haiku, sis!
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Nov 24, 2020 @ 20:40:48
See… It’s where my mind goes!
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Nov 25, 2020 @ 15:27:11
That’s my sis 😉
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