Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge Prompt No. 34: Nativity

Ronovan’s Decima Challenge: Use Stable in the D rhyme line.

Ronovan Writes Decima Challenge Image
 
 Nativity
 
 Mary and Joseph made their way
 She on a donkey, him by foot
 He felt that they should just stay put
 But listened to what He had to say
  
 Weary Mary began to pray
 The pressure told her time was nigh
 She needed somewhere she could lie
 Late they arrived at the stable
 Held on ‘til she was unable
 The night pierced by a baby’s cry 

Ritu 2020

24 Comments (+add yours?)

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  2. Jennie
    Dec 05, 2020 @ 13:07:38

    Well done, Ritu. That was lovely!

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  3. robbiesinspiration
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 05:26:19

    Very nice, Ritu

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  4. Erika
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 14:13:08

    Sis, this was amazingly beautiful! It gave me goosebumps 💖

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  5. Frank Hubeny
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 13:48:19

    Joseph needed to stop anywhere they could since Mary would soon give birth. I like how you made that clear.

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  6. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 13:09:58

    You did a great job, this is lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

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  7. syl65
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 11:17:33

    Beautiful, Nativity 🙏🏽💜

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  8. willowdot21
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 09:04:37

    So beautiful , so apt 💜

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  9. Dracul Van Helsing
    Dec 03, 2020 @ 05:22:55

    That’s excellent. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

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