The Carrot Ranch Prompt, this week:
February 4, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features a substitution. How might a character or situation be impacted by a stand-in? Bonus points for fairy tale elements. Go where the prompt leads.
Finding Your Prince Charming
Once upon a time, there was a beautiful Princess, awaiting her Prince Charming.
After reading the Find Your Prince self-help book, she tried the Sleeping Beauty, the Snow White, and even the Cinderella.
Nothing.
Eventually, she decided to use her long hair as she attempted the Rapunzel.
Sitting in her tower, with her golden plait fluttering out of the window, she felt a tug.
“Yes! Finally, my Prince is coming!”
More pulling followed by the grunt of her beloved-to-be as he hoisted himself up.
Alas, no Prince, just the toothless Palace window cleaner!
No happily ever after, just yet!
Sam "Goldie" Kirk
Feb 13, 2021 @ 16:34:50
Funny! “Find Your Prince self-help book” that was the coolest part. I can totally see this book being the next best-seller.
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Ritu
Feb 13, 2021 @ 16:35:53
Ha ha! Thanks!
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Jennie
Feb 13, 2021 @ 01:52:21
That was fun! You are a master of fractured fairy tales.
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Ritu
Feb 13, 2021 @ 07:38:22
Why, thank you, Jennie!
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Jennie
Feb 13, 2021 @ 13:32:36
All true! 🥰
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Lance Greenfield
Feb 12, 2021 @ 15:48:45
Great 99-word story with a nice twist at the end.
Lucky Princess!
Gummy window cleaners are much more practical than lay-about, handsome princes, don’t you think?
Ha-ha-happy ever after.
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Ritu
Feb 12, 2021 @ 15:49:49
Ha ha! Thanks Lance! Glad you enjoyed my twisted tale!!!
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OIKOS™-Editorial
Feb 07, 2021 @ 20:04:17
Lol Your imagination is wonderful, Sis! 😉
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Ritu
Feb 07, 2021 @ 21:46:54
It has its moments 🤪
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OIKOS™-Editorial
Feb 08, 2021 @ 11:53:30
🙂
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OIKOS™-Editorial
Feb 08, 2021 @ 11:53:40
😉
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Diedre Blake
Feb 06, 2021 @ 23:59:01
Love this!!😂
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Ritu
Feb 07, 2021 @ 09:11:25
Thank you!
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Carol anne
Feb 06, 2021 @ 10:39:30
great story! ❤ ❤
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Ritu
Feb 06, 2021 @ 12:49:20
Glad you liked it!
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petespringerauthor
Feb 06, 2021 @ 02:53:34
Hee-hee! Just a slight disappointment.
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Ritu
Feb 06, 2021 @ 08:34:09
Just a little! 😀
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Erika
Feb 05, 2021 @ 18:58:47
Haha, good one 😂
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 19:40:37
Lol, thanks, Sis!
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willowdot21
Feb 05, 2021 @ 18:58:31
Absolutely lovely Sis 💜💜💜
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 19:40:57
Thank you, Sis 💜
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willowdot21
Feb 05, 2021 @ 19:41:49
💜💜💜💜
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Darlene
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:41:55
That was very clever and very funny!!
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:47:59
Thanks, Darlene!
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johnrieber
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:22:17
Bravo!
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:34:48
Thank you!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:06:20
Ah, so the Princess was Prince-less!
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 17:34:42
Indeed, Sis!
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D. Avery @shiftnshake
Feb 05, 2021 @ 16:50:56
I like the “princess moves” that she tries out. Maybe the “Rapunzel” was successful. The next level in her self-help book will educate her about toads and such; we don’t always recognize our prince at first sight. And he does windows!
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2021 @ 16:54:41
See, a plus there, if ever there was one. Palaces have such high windows…!
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