RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #154 Darkness&Deep

Lovely Ron’s Prompt

Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge Image 2016

Darkness & Deep

Feels like Ron’s prompt words couldn’t have come at a more apt time with all the tragedies here…

It inspired a Freku. Ron created this form which is basically a free verse poem with a three line haiku to tie it all together.

Inside us all
Is good and bad
Things make us laugh
They make us mad

How we react
Colours the world
Our actions spread
Like smoke, unfurled

If only we were
To think a while
Who will we please?
Who will we rile?

For every Yang
There is a Yin
We just need
To look within

* * *

Looking deep inside
We can find a way to change
Lighten the Darkness

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. I write therefore I am alive.
    Aug 02, 2017 @ 19:29:51

    Love this line: “For every Yangโ€จThere is a Yin” ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. dornahainds
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 18:50:56

    Marvelous! ๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน๐ŸŒน

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  3. Judy E Martin
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 18:25:34

    Very well said Sis. If only the light would prevail. xx

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  4. Wild Daffodil
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 11:26:30

    Perfect!

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  5. sheleftme11
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 08:43:12

    What if you’ve digged up your life so deep that U cant come out even if u r willing to? :/

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  6. Rajiv
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:22:21

    Donovan

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  7. Lizl Bennefeld
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 04:05:17

    Yes

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  8. reocochran
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 02:53:45

    Oops! Lovely haiku form, Ronovan. You chose beautiful words put together to form your original haiku, Ritu. ๐ŸŽ†

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  9. reocochran
    Jun 20, 2017 @ 02:52:04

    Yes! Let’s “lighten the darkness!” Lovely haiku, Ronovan.

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  10. willowdot21
    Jun 19, 2017 @ 22:42:22

    As you say Sis, there is dark and light within us all. I just pray the light will win ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’œ

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  11. pranabaxom
    Jun 19, 2017 @ 21:20:17

    Beautiful Ritu. We can always hope but the silent majority needs to be vocal and active.

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