Lovely Ron’s Prompt
Darkness & Deep
Feels like Ron’s prompt words couldn’t have come at a more apt time with all the tragedies here…
It inspired a Freku. Ron created this form which is basically a free verse poem with a three line haiku to tie it all together.
Inside us all
Is good and bad
Things make us laugh
They make us madHow we react
Colours the world
Our actions spread
Like smoke, unfurledIf only we were
To think a while
Who will we please?
Who will we rile?For every Yang
There is a Yin
We just need
To look within* * *
Looking deep inside
We can find a way to change
Lighten the Darkness
I write therefore I am alive.
Aug 02, 2017 @ 19:29:51
Love this line: “For every Yang There is a Yin” 😊
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Ritu
Aug 02, 2017 @ 19:30:28
Thank you 😊
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dornahainds
Jun 20, 2017 @ 18:50:56
Marvelous! 🌹🌹🌹
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 19:04:10
Thank you Dorna 🌹🌹🌹
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Judy E Martin
Jun 20, 2017 @ 18:25:34
Very well said Sis. If only the light would prevail. xx
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 19:03:35
Thanks sis… we can hope xxx
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Wild Daffodil
Jun 20, 2017 @ 11:26:30
Perfect!
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 12:21:06
Thank you 😊
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sheleftme11
Jun 20, 2017 @ 08:43:12
What if you’ve digged up your life so deep that U cant come out even if u r willing to?
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 12:12:18
You can always come out. Stay positive. It always helps 😊
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sheleftme11
Jun 21, 2017 @ 07:31:40
Thanks for the motivation 😊
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Ritu
Jun 21, 2017 @ 07:41:38
Always here to put a positive spin on things ! 😀
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Rajiv
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:22:21
Donovan
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:59:41
R R R Ronovan!
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Rajiv
Jun 20, 2017 @ 17:53:59
D D D D Donovan!
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 18:02:23
😝😝😝
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Lizl Bennefeld
Jun 20, 2017 @ 04:05:17
Yes
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:58:40
Indeed ❤
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reocochran
Jun 20, 2017 @ 02:53:45
Oops! Lovely haiku form, Ronovan. You chose beautiful words put together to form your original haiku, Ritu. 🎆
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:57:15
Lol! Thank you!
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reocochran
Jun 20, 2017 @ 02:52:04
Yes! Let’s “lighten the darkness!” Lovely haiku, Ronovan.
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:57:00
Thank you!
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willowdot21
Jun 19, 2017 @ 22:42:22
As you say Sis, there is dark and light within us all. I just pray the light will win 🤗💜
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Ritu
Jun 20, 2017 @ 06:55:25
WE can only hope sis! ❤
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willowdot21
Jun 20, 2017 @ 12:50:14
Indeed 💜
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pranabaxom
Jun 19, 2017 @ 21:20:17
Beautiful Ritu. We can always hope but the silent majority needs to be vocal and active.
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Ritu
Jun 19, 2017 @ 21:54:01
We all have that inside us, which means we all need to be vocal and active.
Thank you 🙂
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