WRITESPIRATION #128 52 WEEKS IN 52 WORDS WEEK 33 – The Persistent Dog

Sacha’s back with her #Writespiration prompt!


Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.

The persistent dog

Now it was so tempting to write something about a cute furry animal, barking and barking to get attention… but I wasn’t going the easy route!

“C.mon baby, you wanna drink?”
Turning away from the alcohol fumes, wafting their way over the bar, Tina went to serve the next customer.
Jim asked again, grabbing her hand this time.
She leered at her cheating ex, who thought a quick drink would fix everything.
The persistent dog never gave up.

38 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Janni Styles
    Aug 19, 2017 @ 02:04:25

    Well done!



  2. Tiff
    Aug 17, 2017 @ 16:27:50

    Interesting story! I like how there’s a word limit as part of the twist! Look forward to reading more stories from you 😊

    Liked by 1 person


  3. Vishwas
    Aug 17, 2017 @ 08:19:25

    Superb..Loved it..

    Liked by 1 person


  4. Miriam Hurdle
    Aug 17, 2017 @ 03:10:03

    I love it, Ritu….

    Liked by 1 person


  5. dornahainds
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 22:14:10

    Very Nice! 😎😎😎

    Liked by 1 person


  6. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 19:31:22

    Wonderful, Ritu!! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person


  7. willowdot21
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 17:21:29

    Excellent 💜🌹

    Liked by 1 person


  8. Jeyran Main
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 15:42:32

    I just wanted to drop you a line to let you know that I have nominated you for the ‘one lovely blog’ award. If you wish to tag back, that is up to you. Thank you for always dropping by and I appreciate the support.

    Liked by 1 person


  9. Becca Barracuda
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 15:11:10

    Ha! Love it, Ritu! You never go the easy route, and that’s one, of the many, things that makes you so awesome!

    Liked by 1 person


  10. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:40:29


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  11. Erika Kind
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:24:53

    Hehe… good one, sis!!

    Liked by 1 person


  12. Judy E Martin
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:21:35

    Love it Sis. A very unexpected take! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person


  13. syl65
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:15:43

    Love the satire Sister!!

    Liked by 1 person


  14. foodzesty
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 12:57:41

    Awww, smart 🙂 Me likeeee this one 🙂 haha

    Liked by 1 person


  15. sheldonk2014
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 12:00:43

    Loooove this Ritu

    Liked by 1 person


  16. Mr. Militant Negro
    Aug 16, 2017 @ 08:49:38

    Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.

    Liked by 1 person


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