RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #170 Heart&Need

Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt words this week:

Heart & Need

Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge Image 2016

I thought I would try a few different takes.

First a 3/5/3 haiku

Without care
A heart can wither
Needing love

Ritu 2017

Then a 5/7/5 haiku

What my heart desires
You, me, alone, together
Celebrating love

Ritu 2017

And a 5/7/5/7/7 Tanka

A pulsating heart
Running on passionate fumes
Needs a love refill
Attraction will light the flame
Only love will fill the void.

Ritu 2017

 

39 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 22:45:00

    Thank you 🤝

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  2. Erika Kind
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 19:16:12

    Wonderfully done! The tanka is the crown!!

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  3. Miriam Hurdle
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 06:02:07

    Love all the love poems, Ritu!

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  4. Kurian
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 04:56:45

    All three are so lovely to read. Though I haven’t understood the sequence.
    Doesn’t matter, it’s from my favourite blogger and hence the best

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  5. Robert Matthew Goldstein
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 04:12:58

    Nicely done Ritu!

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  6. syl65
    Oct 10, 2017 @ 03:17:57

    Three gems Sister!!

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  7. dornahainds
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:38:23

    Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀

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  8. OIKOS™-Redaktion
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:26:52

    Great! Thx for sharing. Have a nice week ahead: 😉
    Hope the birds are still alive, and Sonu Singh is still in town. LOL Michael

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  9. OIKOS™-Redaktion
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:22:39

    Reply

  10. sonofabeach96
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:10:22

    They’re all good, but I really love the second one. 😊

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  11. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:04:42

    It’s like a cake tower of poetic yumminess!

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  12. willowdot21
    Oct 09, 2017 @ 22:15:24

    All truly beautiful Sis 💜💖💝

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