Lovely Ron’s haiku prompt words this week:
Heart & Need
I thought I would try a few different takes.
First a 3/5/3 haiku
Without care
A heart can wither
Needing loveRitu 2017
Then a 5/7/5 haiku
What my heart desires
You, me, alone, together
Celebrating loveRitu 2017
And a 5/7/5/7/7 Tanka
A pulsating heart
Running on passionate fumes
Needs a love refill
Attraction will light the flame
Only love will fill the void.Ritu 2017
But I Smile Anyway... 
Oct 10, 2017 @ 22:45:00
Thank you 🤝
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 19:16:12
Wonderfully done! The tanka is the crown!!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 19:25:42
Thank you Sis!!!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 20:00:07
You are very welcome, dear!!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 06:02:07
Love all the love poems, Ritu!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:04:04
You are so sweet Miriam, thank you !
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:29:31
You’re welcome, sweet Ritu!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 04:56:45
All three are so lovely to read. Though I haven’t understood the sequence.
Doesn’t matter, it’s from my favourite blogger and hence the best
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:03:50
Lol! the numbers count as the amount of syllables per line.
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 11:50:52
Oh okay, there’s a science involved. Great
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 18:11:25
A form… so.to speak!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 19:20:59
Great
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 04:12:58
Nicely done Ritu!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:03:18
Thanks Rob! Hope you’re well!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 17:47:01
Doing OK. Almost finished with the maintenance work on the blog.
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 18:17:28
It is very time consuming isn’t isn’t!
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Oct 12, 2017 @ 02:35:56
Yes. But I’m beginning to see improvements in performance and site ranking.
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Oct 12, 2017 @ 06:52:10
Oh well that is great then!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 03:17:57
Three gems Sister!!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:02:54
Why thank you Kind Brother!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 11:22:24
You’re welcome always dear Sister!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 18:10:45
🤗
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Oct 11, 2017 @ 04:08:50
🤗
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:38:23
Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:01:29
Thank you Dorna!
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:26:52
Great! Thx for sharing. Have a nice week ahead: 😉
Hope the birds are still alive, and Sonu Singh is still in town. LOL Michael
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:01:12
Lol Michael! They are all still around and happy!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 09:53:11
HI, Ritu! Thats great! Have a nice day. 😉 Michael
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 18:09:35
You Too!!!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 18:46:46
Thx 😉
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:22:39
Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:00:51
Thank you !
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:10:22
They’re all good, but I really love the second one. 😊
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:00:42
~Thank you !
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 14:20:27
You’re welcome. 😊😊
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 23:04:42
It’s like a cake tower of poetic yumminess!
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Oct 10, 2017 @ 07:00:33
Aw thank you Annette!
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 22:15:24
All truly beautiful Sis 💜💖💝
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Oct 09, 2017 @ 22:15:55
Thank you so much sis ❤
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