Sacha’s #Writespiration prompt this week:
Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.
This week I want you to write about what lays behind a waterfall.
The stench was coming from behind the curtain of water falling ahead of them.
“What do you think, Inspector?”
DI Jones looked at the waterfall. They’d looked everywhere else.
“Get the team to go in.”
***
A few hours later, three body bags lay in front of him.
What a hiding place!
http://sachablack.co.uk/2017/12/06/writespiration-144-52-weeks-in-52-words-week-49/
Judy E Martin
Dec 07, 2017 @ 20:30:43
Oh, well done Sis. You made a great thriller out of that 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 22:03:41
Thanks sis xxx
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robbiesinspiration
Dec 07, 2017 @ 16:05:16
You will make a great crime writer, Ritu. Well done.
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 22:02:32
Wow! Thanks Robbie!!!!
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Adventures of a New Floridian
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:37:15
This would make for a really good short story! Very well written Ritu! 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:39:47
Thank you so much! There was definitely more I could have written!!! 52 word limit really makes you think!
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Adventures of a New Floridian
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:57:36
I can imagine! It’s really amazing that you managed to make a mystery with only 52 words. I didn’t even suspect dead bodies!
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 08:12:08
😁 thanks for appreciating!!!
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syl65
Dec 07, 2017 @ 04:06:11
A bone chilling mystery Sister!!
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:07:09
Indeed Brother!!!
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syl65
Dec 07, 2017 @ 14:04:01
😊
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dornahainds
Dec 06, 2017 @ 22:46:10
Oh! Aye! 😎😎😎😎😎
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:02:42
Thanks Dorna!
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Michael
Dec 06, 2017 @ 22:37:46
Good one Ritu, I found this one a challenge, the 52 words forces you to leave out a lot doesn’t it.
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Ritu
Dec 07, 2017 @ 07:01:37
It really was a proper challenge!!! I wanted to write so much more!!!!
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Erika Kind
Dec 06, 2017 @ 20:37:39
Oh… looking different at (or behind) waterfalls from now on… lol!
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Ritu
Dec 06, 2017 @ 20:37:56
Ha ha sis!!!
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Erika Kind
Dec 07, 2017 @ 15:05:07
😄
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