Colleen’s back with her synonym poetry challenge!

The words to (not) use are:

Dance & Command

A Tanka



Every sway and whirl
Demanding your attention
Pulling eyes to me
Our bodies gyrate in tune
Though I dominate your heart

Ritu 2018

Sorry, I wanted to write more, but another migraine is about to hit…

36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Trackback: #TANKA TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE, “Dance & Command,” NO. 79 RECAP, #SYNONYMSONLY – Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer
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  3. Jennie
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 13:06:11




  4. Erika Kind
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 12:59:50

    Hehe… I like that. Isn’t it a woman’s magical ability to direct the man in a way he still thinks he dominates? LOL!

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  5. OIKOS™-Redaktion
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 08:17:46


  6. robbiesinspiration
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 03:54:12

    Very nice, Ritu. You shouldn’t be getting migraines during holidays.You must rest and relax.

    Liked by 1 person


  7. Hélène (Willow Poetry)
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 01:42:34

    Dance while you sleep Ritu, great poem.

    Liked by 1 person


  8. syl65
    Apr 11, 2018 @ 00:41:09

    I hope the migraine didn’t last long Sister!!

    Liked by 1 person


  9. willowdot21
    Apr 10, 2018 @ 22:49:16

    Great post hope you can swerve the migraine.💜💜

    Liked by 1 person


  10. dornahainds
    Apr 10, 2018 @ 22:27:07

    Groovy. 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀🥀

    Liked by 1 person


  11. Colleen Chesebro
    Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:18:09

    Ohhhh… turn up the heat Ritu! I love it. ❤

    Liked by 1 person


  12. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:15:09

    You go gurl!

    Liked by 1 person


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