Colleen’s back with her synonym poetry challenge!
The words to (not) use are:
Dance & Command
A Tanka
Every sway and whirl
Demanding your attention
Pulling eyes to me
Our bodies gyrate in tune
Though I dominate your heartRitu 2018
Sorry, I wanted to write more, but another migraine is about to hit…
Jennie
Apr 11, 2018 @ 13:06:11
🙂
LikeLike
Erika Kind
Apr 11, 2018 @ 12:59:50
Hehe… I like that. Isn’t it a woman’s magical ability to direct the man in a way he still thinks he dominates? LOL!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 14:52:15
Oh absolutely sis!!! 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Erika Kind
Apr 12, 2018 @ 18:15:48
😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
OIKOS™-Redaktion
Apr 11, 2018 @ 08:17:46
Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
LikeLiked by 1 person
robbiesinspiration
Apr 11, 2018 @ 03:54:12
Very nice, Ritu. You shouldn’t be getting migraines during holidays.You must rest and relax.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:15:52
I don;t know where they are coming from Robbie… Seeing the Dr today.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hélène (Willow Poetry)
Apr 11, 2018 @ 01:42:34
Dance while you sleep Ritu, great poem.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:14:56
I tried to Hélène, but the headache didn’t allow me! Maybe tonight!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hélène (Willow Poetry)
Apr 11, 2018 @ 14:47:00
Sorry, I do hope the doctor will be able to help you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 14:55:18
Fingers crossed Hélène.
LikeLiked by 1 person
syl65
Apr 11, 2018 @ 00:41:09
I hope the migraine didn’t last long Sister!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:12:22
Thankfully it hit as I was due to go bed, but this morning there is still a remnant… No fair!
LikeLiked by 1 person
syl65
Apr 11, 2018 @ 15:23:54
Not fair play at all! Hope it doesn’t put a damper on your break and writing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 15:30:41
Well… it’s still niggling . I’m at the Drs… but guess what… I finished!!! Just posted my happiness!!!!
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 10, 2018 @ 22:49:16
Great post hope you can swerve the migraine.💜💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:11:49
Oh it hit sis…
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:21:40
Oh! I am so sorry take it easy today 💜💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:28:25
Trying… ❤
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:29:32
Try harder
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:33:04
Dr’s today…
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:34:04
Good luck at the Drs Sis, I have the Drs today as well 💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:37:23
Good luck to you too sis ! ❤
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:38:02
What a pair we are!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:45:36
I know! ❣
LikeLike
willowdot21
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:46:35
💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
dornahainds
Apr 10, 2018 @ 22:27:07
Groovy. 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀🥀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 11, 2018 @ 07:11:37
Thanks Dorna!
LikeLike
Colleen Chesebro
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:18:09
Ohhhh… turn up the heat Ritu! I love it. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:18:26
Glad you liked it Colleen ❣
LikeLiked by 1 person
Colleen Chesebro
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:18:51
Sleep well, sweet lady! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:29:26
💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Annette Rochelle Aben
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:15:09
You go gurl!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ritu
Apr 10, 2018 @ 21:16:04
Thanks sis. I gotta go bed Now! 😣
LikeLiked by 2 people