Charli’s prompt this week:
August 23, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes magic. It can be a supernatural force, a moment or idea, or use it as a verb. Go where the prompt leads.
Sleight Fright
“Think of a name.”
Deanna held her chosen name tightly in her mind and nodded.
“Think of an object related to that name.”
She self-consciously touched her wrist, where her watch was.
Except it wasn’t there.
Where was it? It was the only thing she had left of him.
“I believe you were thinking of Peter, and his black diver’s watch, am I right?”
The magician held out a watch.
Sleight of hand or magic, she didn’t know, but Deanna didn’t wait to find out. She rushed to the front, snatched the watch and rushed out of the building.
https://carrotranch.com/2018/08/24/august-23-flash-fiction-challenge/
manyofus1980
Sep 26, 2018 @ 05:41:52
Love this ritu! Very good! ❤
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Ritu
Sep 26, 2018 @ 06:53:51
Glad you enjoyed!
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anuragbakhshi
Aug 29, 2018 @ 07:36:54
Some intense love there…and longing.
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Ritu
Aug 29, 2018 @ 08:23:01
Thanks Anurag 🙂
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Charli Mills
Aug 28, 2018 @ 06:32:16
A well played trick, and yet a deeply felt response. Good contrast between the action and emotion, Ritu!
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2018 @ 08:05:17
Thank you Charli 💜
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Norah
Aug 27, 2018 @ 08:06:58
A magician removed my watch once and I didn’t even notice. 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 27, 2018 @ 08:45:53
It’s amazing how they do it!!!
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Norah
Aug 28, 2018 @ 03:55:21
It is! Magic! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 28, 2018 @ 08:04:55
😁
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica
Aug 26, 2018 @ 08:43:45
Oh, just a few short words and they say so much. It’s magic!
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Ritu
Aug 26, 2018 @ 09:32:22
Thanks Marje! 🌠
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Ruchira Khanna
Aug 26, 2018 @ 04:22:05
Magicians!!
The need of the world…wish it could eradicate all that we wish for…sigh!
Good take 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 26, 2018 @ 09:30:44
Thanks Ruchira 🤗
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syl65
Aug 25, 2018 @ 22:38:09
Some illusionist are truly convincing Sister!
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 22:38:43
They really are Brother 🌠
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syl65
Aug 25, 2018 @ 23:29:56
😲
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Erika Kind
Aug 25, 2018 @ 20:12:37
Magicians can be scary indeed!
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 20:53:02
They can!!!
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Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections
Aug 25, 2018 @ 18:28:09
A magician on steroids, Ritu. Not only snatches her watch but her thoughts, too! Well done.
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 18:37:03
Thanks Molly 💜
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Jacquie Biggar
Aug 25, 2018 @ 18:28:06
Magicians always freak me out. They seem to travel an invisible line, one between light and darkness!
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 18:36:51
I agree. The good ones are quite freaky!
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willowdot21
Aug 25, 2018 @ 16:40:00
I really liked that Sis 💜
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 16:58:38
Glad you liked. 🌸🌸🌸
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 25, 2018 @ 15:11:38
Goosebumps
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 15:30:27
Wow! Thanks sis 💜
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Neha Sharma
Aug 25, 2018 @ 15:10:33
This is really well-penned, Ritu! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 15:30:15
Thank you Neha!
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Neha Sharma
Aug 25, 2018 @ 15:42:51
My pleasure, Ritu! 🙂
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Jennie
Aug 25, 2018 @ 13:59:36
This was good, Ritu!
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 14:00:56
Thanks Jennie 💜
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Jennie
Aug 25, 2018 @ 14:20:56
You’re welcome, Ritu. ❤️
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robbiesinspiration
Aug 25, 2018 @ 13:58:22
Ah, I might just react the same way if a magician took my watch. Great piece, Ritu.
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Ritu
Aug 25, 2018 @ 14:00:10
Thanks Robbie 😍
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