Ronovan’s Haiku challenge.
Two little ones today…
Took a tumble whilst
Tinkering up on the roof
Well, that'll learn ya!
Ritu 2019
And
Tinker with my heart
I'll tumble into your arms
Just promise - true love
Ritu 2019
06 May 2019 27 Comments
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Ronovan’s Haiku challenge.
Two little ones today…
Took a tumble whilst
Tinkering up on the roof
Well, that'll learn ya!
Ritu 2019
And
Tinker with my heart
I'll tumble into your arms
Just promise - true love
Ritu 2019
Jennie
May 10, 2019 @ 11:54:16
These are really good, Ritu!
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Ritu
May 10, 2019 @ 12:39:17
Thank you Jennie 💜
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Jennie
May 11, 2019 @ 02:30:26
You’re welcome, Ritu. ❤️
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H.R.R. Gorman
May 07, 2019 @ 11:31:07
I like the second one better because it leads tk less bodily injury.
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 12:54:41
Very true!
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robbiesinspiration
May 07, 2019 @ 05:54:07
Both lovely, Ritu.
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 07:00:47
Thanks Robbie 🤗
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syl65
May 07, 2019 @ 05:17:46
You sure can make those words tumble right in place without much tinkering Sister ❤
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 07:00:19
He he thanks Brother 💜
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syl65
May 07, 2019 @ 12:50:58
You’re welcome Sister 💜😀
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OIKOS™-Publishing
May 07, 2019 @ 01:45:45
Fantastic! Yes, the 2nd one rocks. 😉 Michael
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 06:59:42
😁 Thanks Bro!
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OIKOS™-Publishing
May 07, 2019 @ 11:37:05
🙂
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pranabaxom
May 07, 2019 @ 01:22:36
You stole my idea right under my nose. Not that I get up on the roof anymore. These old bones won’t survive a tumble any more. No need for the extra adrenaline 😂
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 06:59:01
Ha ha!!!
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Nova
May 06, 2019 @ 22:39:32
Cute💜
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Ritu
May 07, 2019 @ 06:58:11
Thanks 😊
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simplywendi
May 06, 2019 @ 21:43:10
they are both good the the 2nd one rocks!
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Ritu
May 06, 2019 @ 22:11:09
Thanks Wendi!
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simplywendi
May 06, 2019 @ 23:04:41
my pleasure Ritu!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
May 06, 2019 @ 20:54:39
Two terrific takes
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Ritu
May 06, 2019 @ 21:05:30
Thanks sis! ❤
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Erika Kind
May 06, 2019 @ 20:39:35
Awh, two such sweet takes, sis!
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Ritu
May 06, 2019 @ 21:05:07
Thank you sis!
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Erika Kind
May 07, 2019 @ 15:02:05
💖
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willowdot21
May 06, 2019 @ 20:38:25
Both are both very cute 💜💜
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Ritu
May 06, 2019 @ 21:04:57
Thanks sis!
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