It’s Tuesday, and that means Colleen’s Tanka Challenge! Of course, just providing a couple of words would be far too simple, so we have two words, yes, but we can’t use them! Only synonyms allowed!
An alteration
In attitude will bring
About compassion
We all need to change the way
That we act and see the world
Ritu 2019
H.R.R. Gorman
Jul 29, 2019 @ 17:31:35
I thought I had commented earlier, but drat! Better late than never, I suppose?
Anyway, what I thought I had said was this poem presents such a great call to action! No better call than to kindness. 🙂
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Ritu
Jul 29, 2019 @ 17:46:28
Thank you 😍
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willowdot21
Jul 26, 2019 @ 19:13:01
This is very clever Sis💜💜
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Ritu
Jul 26, 2019 @ 19:17:55
Many thanks, Sis xxx
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Adele Marie
Jul 26, 2019 @ 10:19:55
Beautiful
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Ritu
Jul 26, 2019 @ 17:52:54
Thank you 💜
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thereluctantpoet
Jul 26, 2019 @ 01:13:02
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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thereluctantpoet
Jul 25, 2019 @ 22:24:09
Truth – wonderfully penned, Dear Ritu!!! Hope your week has been going great!!
xoxo
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 22:25:41
Thank you Chuck 💜🙏🏽
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Colleen Chesebro
Jul 25, 2019 @ 20:30:17
This Tanka poem is a fabulous reminder to all of us, Sis. I loved it! ❤
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 21:16:43
Thank you sis 🥰
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syl65
Jul 25, 2019 @ 15:02:34
The ultimate change begins with us. Wonderful reminder Sister 💜
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 18:01:48
It does indeed Brother 🙏🏽
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syl65
Jul 25, 2019 @ 20:21:42
🙏🏽
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Jul 25, 2019 @ 15:02:33
yup, yup yup
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 18:01:33
Yup yuo indeed sis 🥰
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Erika Kind
Jul 25, 2019 @ 15:01:18
Well said, sis! We need to change our attitude, our thinking. In remaining where we are we cannot expect something to change for the better… talking and whining doesn’t suffice!
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 18:01:21
That was exactly what I thought Sis 🥰
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Erika Kind
Jul 25, 2019 @ 20:01:34
Your poem says it all!
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 20:21:55
💜
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Erika Kind
Jul 26, 2019 @ 08:35:52
💖
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OIKOS™-Publishing
Jul 25, 2019 @ 14:58:06
😉 You choose a very interesting image too, Sis! Lovely done! Michael
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 18:00:59
Thanks Bro. Yin and Yang in action 🥰
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robbiesinspiration
Jul 25, 2019 @ 06:10:24
Lovely poem, Ritu.
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Ritu
Jul 25, 2019 @ 06:55:01
Thank you Robbie 💜
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