#TANKA TUESDAY WEEKLY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 219, #SPECIFICFORM

Colleen’s Syllabic Poetry Challenge:

For this poetry challenge, you can write a haiku and/or senryu on any subject you choose.

I’ve gone for the simple 2/3/2 form of Senryu. Hope you enjoy!

Waking
Next to you
Is bliss

Torture
From the night
Finished

You see
You snore - Loud
No sleep

Ritu 2021

26 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Trackback: #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY STARS | Specific Form: #Haiku & #Senryu – Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry
  2. Colleen M. Chesebro
    Apr 01, 2021 @ 19:50:32

    Yes! You got these senryu down, Sis! When I was researching senryu for my book, I couldn’t believe how “randy” the poems were, once they were translated from Japanese. Wow! I like the humor and irony best. ❀

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  3. willowdot21
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 18:05:20

    Oh! Dear ! Love it Sis πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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  4. Erika
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 16:04:31

    Haha, good one, sis!

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  5. syl65
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 15:13:06

    Sounds like a romantic comedy πŸ’œπŸ˜„

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  6. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 14:59:20

    Ha! Cute

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  7. V.J. Knutson
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 14:23:24

    Lol. My husband got a Cpap machine – best thing ever.

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  8. thereluctantpoet
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 14:08:40

    Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

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  9. Keith
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 12:50:26

    Ritu, an unexpected, but not unusual twist. Keith

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  10. robertawrites235681907
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 05:34:21

    Haha, Ritu, the scourge of married life.

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  11. Chel Owens
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 05:33:34

    πŸ˜€ Sounds like someone could use a breathing strip.

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  12. edwardky2
    Mar 31, 2021 @ 05:13:34

    Reblogged this on Ed;s Site..

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