#JusJoJan Daily Prompt – Jan. 3rd/17 – Warning

Day 3 of the #JusJoJan challenge by Linda G Hill

The Just Jot It January 3rd prompt, brought to you by Dan Antion, of the blog “No Facilities,” is: “Warning.” Use it any way you’re inspired to. And make sure you stop by and say hi to Dan as well! Here’s his blog: https://nofacilities.com/

A twisted little limerick take on Jack and Jill! Sorry, not quite sure how my mind ended up on this, considering the prompt word!

Jack, Jill and Bill

There was a young girl called Jill
Who, with Jack, always went up the hill
Then one sunny morning
Without any warning
She went, instead, with Bill!

Poor Jack was broken hearted
How had all this started?
That bump to the head
Had confined him to bed
Was this why they parted?

Now this Bill, he was a stunner
But Jack, oh he was fun-ner
Bill loved his pouting
Jill started doubting
And so she did a runner!

Well, Jack is back with Jill
They don’t go to that hill
Another they found
Less hill, more mound
But still as much of a thrill!

Ritu 2017

jjj-2017

34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. LindaGHill
    Jan 07, 2017 @ 02:02:34

    Hahaha! Oh, that’s lovely my dear. Thanks for the laugh. 😀 ❤

    Liked by 1 person

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  2. oneta hayes
    Jan 05, 2017 @ 05:04:43

    You wrote a keeper for sure. So cute!

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  3. Capt Jill
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 23:17:40

    I’ve heard that rhyme thousands of times in my life, but never your version. 😉
    I like it!

    Like

    Reply

  4. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:52:49

    Ah, ha, ha! What a fun poem, Ritu! Well done. 😀 xx

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  5. Michael
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 22:37:16

    That was a lot of fun Ritu…enjoyed it very much…

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  6. willowdot21
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 18:02:34

    wooooohoooooooooo love it !!

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  7. dornahainds
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 17:31:54

    Fabulous twist of irony. 😉

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  8. vanbytheriver
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 15:36:37

    Jill and Bill ??? Wasn’t meant to be. ☺

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  9. Deb
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 12:18:53

    I love it! A happy ending is always a plus.

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  10. Erika Kind
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 11:11:09

    😂😂😂 I cannot stop laughing! You are a genius, Sis! That was absolutely outstanding!!!! 😂😂😂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  11. robbiesinspiration
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 10:58:26

    Ha ha, Ritu, this is so funny. Tweeted it @bakeandwrite

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  12. Masoom Jethwa
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 09:24:59

    The funny one. Liked it !

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

  13. Judy E Martin
    Jan 03, 2017 @ 08:53:11

    HaHA! Oh, what a fun take on the word Sis! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    Reply

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