Day 16 of Linda’s #JusJoJan challenge, hosted by Shan Jeniah. You can read her blog, Lovely Chaos, here!
The Just Jot It January 16th prompt, brought to you by Blog Woman!!! of Blog Woman!!! -Life, Uncategorized, is: “Impenetrable.” Use it any way you like. And make sure you stop by and say hi to Blog Woman!!!, as well! Here’s her blog: https://blog-woman.com/.
A traiku for today.
Like a fortress wall
Your heart, closed tight to my love
ImpenetrableBut I won’t give up
I’ll scale the walls with passion
Conquering your heartI’ll open your doors
Let love pour into your life
To warm that cold heartRitu 2017
manyofus1980
Feb 11, 2017 @ 15:09:24
I love this! 🙂 thanks fr sharing! ❤ xxx
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Ritu
Feb 11, 2017 @ 15:11:23
Glad you enjoyed! 😍
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shanjeniah
Jan 17, 2017 @ 05:44:41
Lovely!
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Ritu
Jan 17, 2017 @ 07:49:02
Thank you!
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dornahainds
Jan 16, 2017 @ 18:44:44
Beautiful!
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 18:47:33
Thanks Dorna 😊
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willowdot21
Jan 16, 2017 @ 18:00:51
This is so beautiful Ritu. Full of hope, determination and love !! ❤
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 18:02:37
Thank you Willow! I try to be hopeful… you know that! Xxx
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willowdot21
Jan 16, 2017 @ 18:05:27
Yes i do ! 🙂
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Bee Halton
Jan 16, 2017 @ 09:32:35
What a wonderful poem. It made me cry 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 13:37:49
Aw thank you Bee 😚😚😚
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Judy E Martin
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:39:15
Oh, well done Sis! I really struggled wit this one! 🙂
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:45:39
Thank you sis..I admit it was a real toughie!!!
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rosisnails
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:28:56
🙂
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:45:19
😊
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Erika Kind
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:05:45
Good morning, Sis! Keep up the warm-hearted flow…. and send a bit over… it is snowing again… lol!
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 08:45:05
Lol! Send your snow here and I’ll send my warm flow there!!!!
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Erika Kind
Jan 16, 2017 @ 12:45:36
Oh, how I wish we could share, sis… lol!
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Ritu
Jan 16, 2017 @ 13:39:06
If only eh lol!!!
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Erika Kind
Jan 16, 2017 @ 13:47:21
Haha.. right!!!
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