Sue’s photo prompt for #writephoto this week.
Not a creative piece as such this time, more of a reminiscence.
When we were younger, we spent many a summer in Kenya, visiting family. Mombasa was a place we would frequent on occasion. Imagine it, a huge band of Indians, all parked on the beach, women attempting to feed the masses, kids enjoying the water and men nursing several beers!
The tide would go out for a certain time, allowing us to walk out into the sea quite a distance.
Please forgive me, I cannot offer your accurate fact, this is the memory of a 41-year-old from when she was nine!
My Pops wanted to walk out as far as he could so a few of us decided to all go together.
There was me, so brave, venturing out into the open sea. It was fine for the first minute, then I kept feeling strange things under my feet!
I saw sea cucumbers and strange creatures. The seabed was obviously uneven, and as my feet stumbled through the dips and raises, my mind worked overtime.
The seabed was obviously uneven, and as my feet stumbled through the dips and raises, my mind worked overtime.
I managed to convince myself that at the bottom of one of these dips, was a shark’s mouth, and if I put my foot down, it would be bitten off!
That was it, I shouted to Pops that I was going back, turned and ran, arms flailing like a little lunatic, back to the safety of the sand!
They all came back around 45 minutes later, walking almost a kilometre (I think!) into the sea, turning before the tide rose again!
Oh, what a wuss I was! Couldn’t even enjoy the low-tide without my imagination running wild!!!
Eliza Waters
Feb 05, 2017 @ 01:37:15
Ha, the active minds of children!
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Ritu
Feb 05, 2017 @ 09:44:16
I know!!!
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neelwritesblog
Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:34:10
What a wonderfully written piece of childhood nostalgia is this, sis.
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Ritu
Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:47:19
Thank you Bhai!
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robbiesinspiration
Feb 04, 2017 @ 15:52:50
Oh shame, Ritu. You poor little thing. I used to think there was a shark in the swimming pool that came out at night so I wouldn’t even put a toe in the water after nightfall.
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Ritu
Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:19:56
The things us children think eh!!!
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Jennie
Feb 04, 2017 @ 15:23:27
Nice!
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Ritu
Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:18:31
Thanks Jennie!
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Judy E Martin
Feb 04, 2017 @ 13:56:23
Wat a lovely story Sis. Your imagination served you well in the end though, look at the wonderful writing you have created 🙂
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Ritu
Feb 04, 2017 @ 16:14:52
Thanks sis!@!!
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willowdot21
Feb 03, 2017 @ 15:09:14
Well what can I say, lovely memories, and look how useful that imagination of yours is now!! ❤
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Ritu
Feb 03, 2017 @ 15:19:52
Indeed! Thanks Willow!!!
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willowdot21
Feb 03, 2017 @ 15:27:06
❤ ❤
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Michael
Feb 03, 2017 @ 03:52:42
I wouldn’t say you were a wuss, more cautious of your surroundings….great you could share this memory with us Ritu..
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Ritu
Feb 03, 2017 @ 07:48:54
Thank you Michael!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Feb 02, 2017 @ 23:13:46
Great story!
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 23:32:05
Thank you Tonya! Nothing like a true tale!!!
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noorainsobiya
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:53:40
This is such an amazing prompt!! Loved the story 😂 cute you!!
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 22:47:14
Thank you so much! Sue’s prompts are always amazing!!!
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Erika Kind
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:48:32
Awh, that was the fear of a nine-year-old. You are definitely forgiven, Sis!
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:49:59
Lol! Thanks sis. I remember it like it was yesterday… but my memory is probably a little warped!!!
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Erika Kind
Feb 02, 2017 @ 22:01:30
That can be… but happens to all of us 40+ers… lol!
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 22:47:45
Lol!!!
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Erika Kind
Feb 03, 2017 @ 08:14:19
😄
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Sue Vincent
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:27:27
The child’s imagination can create so many fabulous things… not all of them comfortable! A lovely memory, Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:47:01
Thank you Sue!
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Sue Vincent
Feb 02, 2017 @ 22:11:45
🙂
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Tanya
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:13:41
It’s such a wonderful quality to possess a wild imagination from an young age. I loved reading this little story. It’s so cute. Loved it. 😍❤️
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Ritu
Feb 02, 2017 @ 21:15:48
Thank you Tanya! It is so vivid in my mind!!! All these years later!!!
And I agree totally. My kids have great imaginations too and currently in my nursery class I have one 4 year old with the best story telling skills!!!
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Tanya
Feb 03, 2017 @ 06:16:26
Wow! That’s amazing. And then there is me who forgets what she even dreams about. 😂 How are your kids?
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Ritu
Feb 03, 2017 @ 07:49:35
Lol!
My munchkins are wonderful! Still growing, being annoying, but wonderful!
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Tanya
Feb 03, 2017 @ 09:46:56
Awww! That’s adorable.
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Ritu
Feb 03, 2017 @ 13:21:15
😍
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