Messenger #writephoto

Sue’s #Writephoto prompt this week.

corvid in flight - Sue Vincent

Black-winged messenger
Soaring through the skies
On a mission to deliver
Words to the unwise.

Black-winged messenger
Gliding to his destination
To speak his words of wisdom
To the assembled congregation

Black-winged messenger
With feathers widely fanned
Delivering a message
Bringing peace throughout the lands

Ritu 2017

#writephoto

44 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Judy E Martin
    Jul 16, 2017 @ 16:15:17

    A lovely positive take on the prompt, Sis. We could all do with some of that good news! 🙂

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  2. robbiesinspiration
    Jul 15, 2017 @ 16:04:33

    An excellent poem, Ritu. Well done.

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  3. Brenda Davis Harsham
    Jul 15, 2017 @ 14:36:06

    Great poem.

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  5. Erika Kind
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 20:57:35

    Absolutely beautiful, sis!!

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  6. dornahainds
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 15:43:31

    Brava.. 🌷🌷🌷

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  7. Prajakta
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 06:37:02

    After always associating it with Game of Thrones, “black wings, black words” – your poem is so full of hope! A fresh change for me.

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  9. Michael
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 05:22:56

    There’s something so positive and hopeful in this poem Ritu, beautifully stated.

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  10. syl65
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 03:22:54

    Amazing write Sister!!

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  11. Jessica Bakkers
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 02:28:02

    Beautiful!

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  12. Phil Taylor
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 02:20:04

    Beautiful!

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  13. Sarah Brentyn
    Jul 14, 2017 @ 00:11:29

    Love your messenger of peace. ❤

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  14. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 22:45:43

    This is lovely, Ritu. You get extra kudos for writing such wonderful poetry with your “frazzled teacher brain.” 😊❤️ xo

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  15. Yoly
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:56:03

    Beautiful

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  16. davidprosser
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:35:57

    I wish Ritu.
    xxx Cwtch xxx

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  17. Sue Vincent
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:31:24

    I love the idea of the raven bringing peace…he’s a much maligned bird as a rule.

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  18. TanGental
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:26:01

    v good, though if i was being hyper-wotsit I might suggest you have a think about the rhythm of the second verse esp line two…. hope you don’t mind?

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    • Ritu
      Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:52:55

      You can say whatever you like my dear His Geoffleship!!!
      Though this is what a frazzled teacher brain produces whilst dragging itself to the nearing finish line (next Friday!) I don’t have it in me to change anything Lol!!!

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  19. willowdot21
    Jul 13, 2017 @ 21:20:51

    Love this Sis 💜💗

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