Sacha’s back with her #Writespiration prompt!
Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.
The persistent dog
Now it was so tempting to write something about a cute furry animal, barking and barking to get attention… but I wasn’t going the easy route!
“C.mon baby, you wanna drink?”
Turning away from the alcohol fumes, wafting their way over the bar, Tina went to serve the next customer.
Jim asked again, grabbing her hand this time.
She leered at her cheating ex, who thought a quick drink would fix everything.
The persistent dog never gave up.
Janni Styles
Aug 19, 2017 @ 02:04:25
Well done!
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Tiff
Aug 17, 2017 @ 16:27:50
Interesting story! I like how there’s a word limit as part of the twist! Look forward to reading more stories from you 😊
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Ritu
Aug 17, 2017 @ 16:36:31
Thanks Tiff. The limit definiteky makes you think about what you’re writing!
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Vishwas
Aug 17, 2017 @ 08:19:25
Superb..Loved it..
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Ritu
Aug 17, 2017 @ 08:27:38
Thank you Vishwas 😀
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Miriam Hurdle
Aug 17, 2017 @ 03:10:03
I love it, Ritu….
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Ritu
Aug 17, 2017 @ 08:13:59
Thank you Miriam 😊
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Miriam Hurdle
Aug 17, 2017 @ 08:41:12
You’re welcome. I like humor!
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dornahainds
Aug 16, 2017 @ 22:14:10
Very Nice! 😎😎😎
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 22:21:09
Thanks Dorna x
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
Aug 16, 2017 @ 19:31:22
Wonderful, Ritu!! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 19:40:39
Thank you Tonya 💜
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willowdot21
Aug 16, 2017 @ 17:21:29
Excellent 💜🌹
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 17:38:05
Thanks sis! 💜
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Jeyran Main
Aug 16, 2017 @ 15:42:32
I just wanted to drop you a line to let you know that I have nominated you for the ‘one lovely blog’ award. If you wish to tag back, that is up to you. Thank you for always dropping by and I appreciate the support.
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 16:00:49
Thank you so much. 😊
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Becca Barracuda
Aug 16, 2017 @ 15:11:10
Ha! Love it, Ritu! You never go the easy route, and that’s one, of the many, things that makes you so awesome!
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 15:57:59
Aw thank you Becca! I sometimes think we all need to think ‘outside’ the box, don’t you? 😊
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Becca Barracuda
Aug 16, 2017 @ 19:40:06
Definitely!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:40:29
Woof!
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:49:45
🐶😂
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Erika Kind
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:24:53
Hehe… good one, sis!!
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:28:14
A bit of a giggle eh sis!
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Erika Kind
Aug 16, 2017 @ 16:09:01
Haha… for sure!!
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Judy E Martin
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:21:35
Love it Sis. A very unexpected take! 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:26:36
I thought dog .. and this came to mind! Thanks sis!
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Judy E Martin
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:51:58
Well I thought it was perfect 🙂
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 14:55:07
😁
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syl65
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:15:43
Love the satire Sister!!
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:26:05
Glad you enjoyed Brother!
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syl65
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:38:03
Yes I did Sister!!
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:38:13
😃
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foodzesty
Aug 16, 2017 @ 12:57:41
Awww, smart 🙂 Me likeeee this one 🙂 haha
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:25:06
He He! Thanks!!!
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foodzesty
Aug 16, 2017 @ 13:30:59
🙂
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sheldonk2014
Aug 16, 2017 @ 12:00:43
Loooove this Ritu
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Ritu
Aug 16, 2017 @ 12:08:50
Thank you Sheldon! Hope you’re well xxx
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Mr. Militant Negro
Aug 16, 2017 @ 08:49:38
Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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