#WRITESPIRATION #135 52 WEEKS IN 52 WORDS WEEK 40 – Keep Out! @sacha_black

Saha’s #Writespiration Prompt this week…

Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.


Write about the day you ignored the ‘KEEP OUT’ sign.

The putrid smell emanating from beneath the door compelled me to push it open.
I stepped into a dark room, avoided mould filled vessels and mountains of fabric piled haphazardly to open the curtains…
I wish I hadn’t.
That’ll teach me to ignore signs on the door of my teenage son’s bedroom!

37 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:58:11

    Thank you 😊



  2. Autism Youths
    Nov 07, 2017 @ 15:14:54

    Omg this is so well written. Followed 🙂 I also am a teen who aspires to spread awareness of neurological diseases through the love of FOOD in Singapore, Nigeria and other parts of the world. Do join me in my quest ahaha🙂 Do also follow my blog post and check out my posts at https://autismyouths.wordpress.com Here’s to a great friendship. Appreciate it ❤️

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  3. syl65
    Oct 05, 2017 @ 02:03:46


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  4. Michael
    Oct 05, 2017 @ 00:47:22

    I like this one Ritu, it reminded me of once going thru my son’s school bag and discovering the lunches of some days past…

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  5. The Laughable Cheese
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 23:03:10

    https://wordpress.com/post/writeitonmywall.wordpress.com/1106 I saw yours and decided to do one too! 😀 I really like these challenges a lot. The results are always fun.

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  6. The Laughable Cheese
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:53:46

    very nice. the ending caught me by surprise

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  7. vanbytheriver
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:36:01

    Mine never used a sign, somehow, I just knew to stay away. I just read Judy’s, and mentioned that it was wise to keep the door closed. They do outgrow this stuff. Hang in there, Ritu. Nice take on the prompt.

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  8. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 21:30:51


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  9. willowdot21
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:36:17

    Oh! I really love this Sis. 😱🌹💜💜💜💜

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  10. robbiesinspiration
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:33

    Ha ha, Ritu, indeed it will teach you.

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  11. The Satyr
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:18

    Hee Hee Hee! Brilliant! Great twist. Seriously, what is that funk!? X

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  12. Erika Kind
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:42:20

    OMG…. did you visit my house😲

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  13. Judy E Martin
    Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:15:00

    HAHA! I have just finished mine Sis and it seems we are on a similar wavelength this week -)

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