Saha’s #Writespiration Prompt this week…
Your challenge is to write your story using the weekly theme/prompt and write it in just 52 words…. EXACTLY, no more, no less.
Write about the day you ignored the ‘KEEP OUT’ sign.
The putrid smell emanating from beneath the door compelled me to push it open.
I stepped into a dark room, avoided mould filled vessels and mountains of fabric piled haphazardly to open the curtains…
I wish I hadn’t.
That’ll teach me to ignore signs on the door of my teenage son’s bedroom!
Ritu
Nov 07, 2017 @ 17:58:11
Thank you 😊
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Autism Youths
Nov 07, 2017 @ 15:14:54
Omg this is so well written. Followed 🙂 I also am a teen who aspires to spread awareness of neurological diseases through the love of FOOD in Singapore, Nigeria and other parts of the world. Do join me in my quest ahaha🙂 Do also follow my blog post and check out my posts at https://autismyouths.wordpress.com Here’s to a great friendship. Appreciate it ❤️
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syl65
Oct 05, 2017 @ 02:03:46
LOL!!
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:56:41
It’s something I dread happening soon Brother!
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syl65
Oct 05, 2017 @ 14:11:13
Haha, be prepared Sister! Be prepared! 😁
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 16:50:02
eeeek!
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syl65
Oct 05, 2017 @ 16:58:43
😁😁
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Michael
Oct 05, 2017 @ 00:47:22
I like this one Ritu, it reminded me of once going thru my son’s school bag and discovering the lunches of some days past…
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:56:21
Oh, now I have that with my son… AND my husband!
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Michael
Oct 05, 2017 @ 07:02:06
Lol..
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The Laughable Cheese
Oct 04, 2017 @ 23:03:10
https://wordpress.com/post/writeitonmywall.wordpress.com/1106 I saw yours and decided to do one too! 😀 I really like these challenges a lot. The results are always fun.
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:55:19
I do love Sacha’s #Writespiration!
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:55:59
It won’t take me to your post!
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The Laughable Cheese
Oct 05, 2017 @ 08:05:23
Ohh ok https://writeitonmywall.wordpress.com/ It’s the newest one. Thank you for alerting me to this. 🙂
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The Laughable Cheese
Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:53:46
very nice. the ending caught me by surprise
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:54:54
Glad you enjoyed!
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vanbytheriver
Oct 04, 2017 @ 22:36:01
Mine never used a sign, somehow, I just knew to stay away. I just read Judy’s, and mentioned that it was wise to keep the door closed. They do outgrow this stuff. Hang in there, Ritu. Nice take on the prompt.
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 06:53:42
Lol Thanks Van! To be honest we haven’t quite got there yet… this is more in anticipation of the coming of the teen years!!!
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Oct 04, 2017 @ 21:30:51
ewww
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 21:42:48
🤢
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willowdot21
Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:36:17
Oh! I really love this Sis. 😱🌹💜💜💜💜
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:44:11
Thank you sis!
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willowdot21
Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:48:14
My pleasure Sis 💜💜💜🌹🌹
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robbiesinspiration
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:33
Ha ha, Ritu, indeed it will teach you.
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:45:52
So far I have been lucky.. but I dread the day, and it will come, of that I am sure… the teen year is approaching for my Lil Man!
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The Satyr
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:18
Hee Hee Hee! Brilliant! Great twist. Seriously, what is that funk!? X
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:45:12
I don’t know man.. a mix of sweat, hormones and … stuff!!!!
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The Satyr
Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:07:05
Ew, to late in the eve to be dwelling on stuff. Takes a brave mum to enter a lair like that. X
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 20:09:22
As a teacher when we venture into the corridor when the year 6 students have PE… oh my certain smells… multiplied by 60!!!!!
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The Satyr
Oct 05, 2017 @ 10:56:30
Is it wrong to fumigate children en masse? X
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Ritu
Oct 05, 2017 @ 16:48:34
One day it may be a possibility!
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Erika Kind
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:42:20
OMG…. did you visit my house😲
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:44:44
Ha ha lol!!!!!!!!!!
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Erika Kind
Oct 05, 2017 @ 18:35:28
😂😂
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Judy E Martin
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:15:00
HAHA! I have just finished mine Sis and it seems we are on a similar wavelength this week -)
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Ritu
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:43:10
Lol !Just read yours too sis!!!
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Judy E Martin
Oct 04, 2017 @ 19:48:22
🤣🤣🤣
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