Linda’s prompt for SoCS this week…
Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “organ.” Talk about an organ or base your post on the theme of them … or one. Have fun!
Organ grinder,
Won’t you stop
I feel that I’m
About to pop
The kids are tired,
The teachers too
So little time,
So much to do
A year’s gone by
We worked so hard
I’m so burned out
My body feels charred
Exhaustipated
From bottom to top
So Organ grinder, please…
Just stop!Ritu 2018
Penned this morning by a very tired teacher… two days to crawl through!
- Exhaustipated, for those of you that don’t know – so tired I don’t give a sh*t!
Catch ya later Peeps! Happy Saturday!
https://lindaghill.com/2018/07/20/the-friday-reminder-and-prompt-for-socs-july-21-18/
Aug 13, 2018 @ 10:34:11
I loved this nicely done lady.
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Aug 13, 2018 @ 10:51:27
Glad you enjoy 😍
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Jul 31, 2018 @ 21:31:37
exhaustipated? I fucking love it! 😀
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Jul 31, 2018 @ 22:17:05
the BEST. Word. EVER!!!!
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 18:13:21
Well done, Ritu. And, well said!
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 18:14:03
Thanks Jennie… I’ve just about had enough now… Even needed a 3 hour nap this afternoon!!!
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Jul 23, 2018 @ 00:15:41
Thank goodness for the nap!
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Jul 23, 2018 @ 05:48:00
It was obviously much needed!
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Jul 23, 2018 @ 10:46:24
🙂
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 12:14:41
Love it. I found this one a hard one to do.
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 14:54:48
It wasn’t easy… Thank you 💜
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 02:24:58
Nice one Ritu
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Jul 22, 2018 @ 08:07:50
Thanks ☺️
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 16:36:23
love it!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 17:46:40
Thanks Laura 💜
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 16:22:29
Happy Saturday Sis, you are a star , love your poem 💜🌹
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 17:46:18
Thank you sis 💜💜💜
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 17:59:00
Pleasure Sis 💜💜
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:54:37
’feels’ feels wring in the flow, Ritu.
IMHO it may flow better as
’My body’s charred’ (’is’ rather than ’feels’)
Or even
’’My body charred’
Just a thought – I loved the way you got it all across and made the grinding organ cone to life. Ouch!
Have a lovely weekend, Ritu.
G:)
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:56:32
Thanks G!!! Good suggestion. As it was stream of consciousness I can’t change it but I get your thoughts!
Have a great one!!!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:56:33
’come to life’ d’oh!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:57:03
😁
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:42:04
So fun, Ritu! I hope you get a chance to relax and rebuild before it starts all over.
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:51:35
Thanks Dan! Here’s hoping!! Have a good one!!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 07:26:02
A wonderful and expressive poem, Ritu
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 08:14:43
Thank you Robbie ❤
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 07:25:08
My cousin says pretty much the same. I will use exhaustipated with her! But “A years gone by” is a pretty big WTF. Four words to say whoosh. We’re in July already and Sky is showing Xmas movies… what’s that about and when did I blink and lose three months!!
Nicely done Ritu
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 08:15:28
Thanks Gary! I really cannot function at the moment, can’t wait for the last day.. then I’m off to nurse my Pops!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 09:31:09
I suffered that after mass big exam runs. Last few weeks have been recovering! Schools broke up here yesterday. I heard the kids counting down to 2pm at the primary school I used to be a governor at. Big hit when I thought not that long ago my eldest started his first school day there!! When do you finish and I hope your pops is doing well too x
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 09:52:44
Thanks Gary. Two days to go!!! Pops is getting stronger daily thank God! X
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 09:54:22
Awesome to hear that Ritu. Flipping aging sucks. Is he home yet?
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 10:01:21
He is staying with his niece, my cousin. She lives near the hospital too. When I go, I will settle him back home and stay until my mum is back. I think his yoga has definitely helped his healing. X
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 13:14:11
Good place to be while recovering then. Yoga is a very understated well being exercise of mind and body too. Kudos to him there. And to you for going to stay. Family is huge… and sadly less than it used to be once upon a time. X
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 13:22:36
That is one thing my parents instilled in me… family matters!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 07:08:32
Very cool!
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Jul 21, 2018 @ 07:12:36
You like 💜
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