Charli’s Carrot Ranch Fiction prompt this week.
March 14, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a chisel. Use chisel as a noun or a verb. Think about what might be chiseled, who is chiseling. Be the chisel. Go where the prompt leads!
Drop Dead Gorgeous
All the ladies stopped what they were doing and stared.
Zeus sighed. He was used to it.
No matter where he went, the first sight of his chiselled features always rendered the opposite sex speechless.
His mates would often comment jealously about his ability to have any woman he wanted, falling at his feet.
But it’s not all it’s made out to be, being drop dead gorgeous.
A mute partner, who is always staring at him gormlessly, falling at the sight of him, or even dropping dead on occasion…
Not quite the kind of relationship he was looking for.
Charli Mills
Mar 20, 2019 @ 02:19:19
Hard to be Zeus! What a fun take on the prompt (and great use of the word “gormlessly”).
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Ritu
Mar 20, 2019 @ 07:00:37
Glad you enjoyed!!! It was fun to write!!
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robbiesinspiration
Mar 19, 2019 @ 04:34:47
Oh Ritu, this is so funny. Well done.
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Ritu
Mar 19, 2019 @ 07:01:03
Glad you. Liked, Robbie!
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Jennie
Mar 18, 2019 @ 13:43:41
And dropping dead, no less. This was a great take on the chisel prompt, Ritu. 😀
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Ritu
Mar 18, 2019 @ 15:58:14
Glad you enjoyed!!
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Jennie
Mar 19, 2019 @ 00:06:27
I really did! 😍
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anuragbakhshi
Mar 18, 2019 @ 09:27:38
Ha ha ha, poor guy…I mean God!
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Ritu
Mar 18, 2019 @ 15:54:55
Poor God indeed!
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papershots
Mar 18, 2019 @ 09:03:47
Haha! Love it. Great take on the prompt!
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Ritu
Mar 18, 2019 @ 15:54:47
Thank you!
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syl65
Mar 16, 2019 @ 22:01:22
Poor Zeus, the looks that kill 😄
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Ritu
Mar 16, 2019 @ 23:38:08
Not the best way to look, eh Brother!
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syl65
Mar 17, 2019 @ 16:28:47
Haha!!
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Erika Kind
Mar 16, 2019 @ 21:53:28
Haha, love it, sis 😄
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Ritu
Mar 16, 2019 @ 23:37:24
Glad you enjoyed sis ! ❤
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Erika Kind
Mar 17, 2019 @ 14:11:07
You know, I always enjoy your takes 💖
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Ritu
Mar 17, 2019 @ 14:45:20
❤
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Erika Kind
Mar 17, 2019 @ 19:51:13
💖
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Mar 16, 2019 @ 15:28:04
hubba, hubba zoot suit!
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Ritu
Mar 16, 2019 @ 21:23:10
He he!!!
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Michael Ogazie
Mar 16, 2019 @ 11:06:15
Reblogged this on Micworldwide.
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TanGental
Mar 16, 2019 @ 00:05:06
Ha dropping dead too. That power. Never had it… thank heavens
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Ritu
Mar 16, 2019 @ 00:06:51
Ha ha! Not sure I’d want that power either!
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TanGental
Mar 18, 2019 @ 21:05:09
yes, I think we’d do well to avoid it…
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Susan Zutautas
Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:49:55
Great take on the prompt!
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Ritu
Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:51:44
Thank you Susan 💜
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johnrieber
Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:49:24
Nice job! I added my story on the challenge page as well!
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Ritu
Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:55:03
I can’t see it!!!
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johnrieber
Mar 15, 2019 @ 23:58:08
I’m not sure what’s going on…I posted it and it’s not there – do they moderate first? I’m a bit frustrated because I also included one previously that never showed up and one didn’t get included in their compilation email of all submissions, so not sure what’s going on because another did get included in comments (not wrap-up) and got a number of likes….
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Ritu
Mar 16, 2019 @ 00:06:26
Strange. Contact charli so she can check her spam x
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Charli Mills
Mar 20, 2019 @ 02:38:11
I sent you an email John to help figure it out. Sorry for the technology bugs!
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