Who’s That Indie Author? Ritu Bhathal

I’ve been featured! Thank you to Book Club Mom, Barbara Vitelli for approaching me!

https://bvitelli2002.wordpress.com/2020/01/21/whos-that-indie-author-ritu-bhathal/

Tuesday Poems For Writers #Inspiration – Self Doubt

Another poem inspired by Lucy ofΒ Blonde Write More! The fear of not being good enough.

Fear
Within
I just feel
Not good enough
For publication
Not able to compete
Or call myself a writer
No one will want to read my book
When others are just so much better
I think I should just delete the whole lot

Ritu 2019

It really is that easy to end up feeling despondant, when you have worked your fingers to the bone, written thousands upon thousands of words, then you compare yourself to another writer.

Big mistake.

Stop thinking you’ll never be the next J.K. Rowling or Stephen King.

They were where you are now, once.

Dream of the possibilities and know that somewhere out there, your book has readers, just waiting for you to get it out there!

Now, I’m off to try and edit a bit more!

The Plight Of The Gingerlily – Jim Webster #blogtour

Today, I am delighted to host fantastic author Jim Webster as he is going on a tour of the Blogosphere for his new release, The Plight of the Lady Gingerlily.

Without further ado, I shall pass you over to Jim!

We shall start with a photo, and the story that was inspired by it!


Delicate work
A casual observer might have assumed that Benor Dorfinngil was in a good mood. He had a spring in his step and might even be whistling a merry tune.Β 
There was good reason for his high spirits. Things were going rather well.Β 
He had funds. Admittedly he’d ended up giving two of the ten alar coins toΒ 
Shena, on the grounds that the costs entailed in purchasing a dress might well come within the definition of legitimate expenses incurred during the investigation. On the other hand, he’d been firm with Tallis. Benor couldn’t see why Tallis needed compensating for the strain of looking after innumerable grandchildren. Given that the alternative would have been accompanying Shena to purchase a dress, Benor felt he’d taken the easy option. Once she’d accepted the coins, Benor had mentioned the name, SalatΒ 
Wheelstrain, to her and Shena had, in good grace, promised to ask around.
Another of the coins had been broken into a most commendable quantity of small change and Mutt was using this to marshal his array of watchers. IfΒ 
the two sisters left the house their movements were tracked and theirΒ 
conversations overheard by a collection of inconspicuous and apparentlyΒ 
innocent children. Benor had been surprised just how much activity MuttΒ 
could command for a comparatively small outlay.
Now he was intent on seeing Faldon the priest. As Faldon had been the instigator of the inquiry, Benor felt that it was only right that he occasionally reported back on what had been achieved. There was the problem that Faldon was disinclined to support anything to unethical, but Benor felt he could gloss over some matters. There was also the hope that Faldon wouldΒ keep his eyes and ears open and might even have something to contribute toΒ 
the investigation.
When Benor arrived at the house he found Faldon sitting out in the streetΒ enjoying the afternoon sun. Unwilling to accept payment for cutting the hairΒ of passers-by, Faldon tended to be paid in kind. Obviously, somebody had gifted him a bench of solid but inelegant construction, and this was set against the front wall of the house. Faldon sat on it, but when BenorΒ appeared, the priest moved to one end to allow the younger man space to sitΒ 
down.
β€œSo how are things progressing?”
Airily Benor said, β€œI now have the two women watched by experts.”
β€œHopefully we shall be ready if she makes a move against the child.” Faldon shifted his position on the bench as if his comment had left himΒ uncomfortable. Then he changed the subject, β€œSo what do you know aboutΒ 
Jorrocks Boat Yard?”
β€œWell, they bought a lot of very poor quality second-hand timber. Also itΒ 
appears Minny thought it important that Santon handled the Jorrocks BoatΒ 
Yard account for Raswil Muldecker the usurer.”
β€œWhat do we know about the yard?”
β€œI’d never heard of them,” Benor admitted. β€œBut then I thought to ask Shena.Β 
They are one of the smaller yards. Old Yalla Jorrocks had a good name, his son, Belan, wasn’t a bad boat builder, but by all accounts, he wasn’t the cheapest and apparently you had to keep an eye on him or corners were cut.Β 
Of the current generation, Ardal is in charge and he is, apparently, theΒ person to go to if you’re planning an insurance swindle or want something
doing that isn’t particularly legal. The smugglers tend to deal with him.”
Faldon asked, β€œSo would it be worth having a look at the yard?”
β€œIt could be. But I doubt they’d welcome casual visitors. I suspect I’d haveΒ 
to look round at night.”
Hesitantly Faldon asked, β€œWould you like me to come with you?”
Surprised Benor said, β€œCertainly, it’s good to have support, but it didn’tΒ 
strike me as the sort of thing you’d want to get involved in.”
β€œI’m feeling a bit guilty,” Faldon admitted. β€œI dumped this job on you andΒ 
haven’t really done a lot to help.”
β€œFair enough. If Mutt can spare the time I’ll get him to come as well. TodayΒ 
has been overcast so it looks like we’ll get a dark night.”

ο€§ο€§ο€§

The night was as dark as Benor hoped. Mutt met them just outside the yard.Β 
He’d insisted on doing a private reconnaissance first. When they met he ledΒ them down a narrow lane between two boatyards leading to the estuary. TheΒ yards on either side of the lane had tall fences made of a mixture of secondΒ and third-hand timber; in various states of decay. As they got close enoughΒ to see the water glinting in the estuary, Mutt stopped.
β€œThis bit is rotten; I got through. You two can follow me.”
Luckily both men were slender and wiry; a more thickset man would have hadΒ trouble. Still, by the time they’d pushed through, the hole was noticeablyΒ larger. They entered the yard behind a pile of timber. Fortunately, it hadn’tΒ been piled against the fence, probably because it was unlikely that theΒ fence could support the weight. The three of them crept out from behind theΒ pile of wood and into the open. The entire area seemed to be a haphazardΒ collection of piles of timber looming out of the darkness. Benor led theΒ way. He could see something against the skyline which looked like a boat onΒ the stocks.
He stopped and listened. There was no sound, just the noises of the city inΒ the background. He stood up. Quietly he said, β€œI think we can walk. ThereΒ 
doesn’t look to be anybody about.”
Cautiously the other two stood up. Mutt hissed, β€œI’ll go to the right a bit,Β 
see if there’s any sign of anybody over there. There’s some sort of hut nearΒ 
the gate in.”
Benor nodded and made his way towards the boat. Faldon moved off to theΒ 
left, β€œThere’s a pile of something over here.”
Benor kept his eye on Mutt, the boy disappeared around a pile of wood, but
there was still no sound. He waited but the boy didn’t come back, so he’dΒ obviously not found anything. He moved forward and as he did so there was aΒ 
ripping sound and then a scream to his left. He spun around and Faldon wasn’tΒ there. Hastily he dropped down onto his hands and knees to make himself lessΒ conspicuous and crawled in the direction of the scream. Suddenly his handsΒ touched canvas.
Quietly he said, β€œFaldon?”
From below him came Faldon’s voice. β€œDown here. I went through the canvas.Β 
The ground here is stone slabs!”
Benor reached out, found a torn end, and tore it further so he could seeΒ down. Below him, he could see the pale blob of Faldon’s face. Mutt appeared
next to him. β€œWhat β€˜appened.”
From below Faldon commented, β€œThere’s a boat down here.”
Benor explained, β€œSo Faldon’s fallen through the cover over a dry dock.”
β€œWell get β€˜im out. There’s a hut over there with a light in the windows. IΒ 
heard the scream, they might of.”
Benor reached down. β€œCan you grab my hand?”
Faldon tried to stand up. β€œI’ve damaged my ankle.”
Benor tried to estimate the depth. β€œIs there a ladder, I don’t fancy theΒ 
drop.”
β€œYes, just along there.” Benor tried to see in the direction Faldon wasΒ pointing. There might be something. He tore the rotten canvas and made hisΒ way in that direction. Yes, there was a ladder. β€œMutt, I’ll go down and helpΒ 
him up, you catch him.”
At the foot of the ladder, Faldon was waiting; he’d used the ladder to haulΒ himself upright. Slowly and with Benor taking the weight, he climbed the ladder.
β€œGet on, someone coming.”
Benor put his shoulder under Faldon and pushed the other man out of the
hole. As he did so a rung, rotten with age, snapped and Benor fell onto theΒ next which also snapped. At this, he tumbled back into the hole.
Mutt repeated, β€œSomeone coming.”
β€œGet Faldon hidden, I’ll hide down here.”
β€œIf they find owt, I’ll let β€˜em chase me.”
Benor looked round for a hiding place. His eyes were becoming accustomed toΒ the light. There was a boat here; perhaps he could hide inside the hull. HeΒ scrambled up the rope tied to the side, dashed across the deck and loweredΒ himself over the combing and into the hold. In there it was dark. He stoodΒ completely still and listened.
A voice said, β€œTelled you there were someone. The sheet’s torn.”
A second voice said, β€œBetter go down and look then.”
There was silence then a curse. β€œWatch the bluidy ladder, it’s knackered.”
β€œHere, stop moaning and I’ll pass you down the torch.”
Suddenly there was a hint of light inside the hull. Obviously, some of theΒ planking hadn’t been caulked yet so light was coming in between them. BenorΒ glanced around; he could make out the mast, seated in a block fastened toΒ the keel. He moved and stood behind that. From outside he heard, β€œNobody outΒ 
here.”
β€œThen look inside the boat.”
β€œWaste of time.”
β€œWhy, had you got something more interesting planned? Look inside the boat.”
Benor heard muffled cursing then there was the sound of booted feet on theΒ deck above him. Suddenly there was light streaming in through the hatch.Β 
Benor pressed himself against the mast. Now with more illumination, he couldΒ see something strange at the stern of the boat. There was some sort of box.
From outside a voice said, β€œWell are you going in?”
β€œIf I am you can bluidy well come up here and hold the ladder.”
Benor looked around desperately for a better place to hide. The box at theΒ stern was the only possible place. He made his way carefully to the stern.Β 
He paused briefly. There were two large timber planks, curved to match theΒ curve of the hull. There was one on the port side, another to starboard, andΒ they appeared to be fastened to the timbers of the hull. For some reason, theΒ two planks were linked, across the hold, by a rope. Benor carefully stepped over it. It appeared to be bar-tight.
Then he saw that running from this rope was another rope which led unto the box. Hastily Benor ducked under the second rope and climbed up into the box.Β 
It appeared to be full of canvas. Frantically he burrowed into it and layΒ there. Now whoever was holding the light was obviously in the hold. BenorΒ could see it coming in through the gaps between the planks of the box.
β€œStill see nowt.”
A third voice said, β€œWell happen it’s because there’s nowt to see.”
The second voice replied. β€œThen stop wasting time and let us search the restΒ 
of the yard.”
The light grew dimmer. Benor lay utterly still in the darkness. He listenedΒ to men cross the deck and drop down onto the ground. He then heard somebodyΒ cursing the broken rungs of the ladder and finally he was alone in theΒ silent darkness. He lay there, still listening; in the far distance he couldΒ hear voices but couldn’t make out the words. Carefully he pulled a stub ofΒ candle out of his belt pouch. Then he took a match out of its tin and withΒ the small pliers provided by the manufacturer, crushed the bulb at the endΒ of the match. It flared into flame and he hastily lit the candle. Then heΒ looked around.
He found himself lying on neatly folded canvas in a box that was comfortablyΒ large enough to hold him and the canvas. When he looked, the back of the boxΒ was the stern of the boat, but it seemed to be hinged. Why would you want toΒ get out of a boat under the waterline? Also, why was there a rope sewn to theΒ canvas and disappearing out through a hole in the hatch?
Was it a drogue to slow the boat down or assist steering?
He climbed out of the box and lowered himself onto the bottom of the hold.Β 
He stepped over the taut robes. If the drogue was released into the water,Β 
it would pull on the cross rope, but the planks fastened to the sides of theΒ hull would take the strain. That didn’t make a lot of sense. If asked toΒ build something like this, he’d have fastened it to the keel, or even to theΒ block in which the mast was seated. These were more substantial pieces ofΒ wood, and capable of taking the strain.
He made his way to the entrance hatch. He climbed up the ladder and onto theΒ deck, shielding his candle with his hat lest the light be seen from outside.Β 
He walked silently across the deck and lowered himself over the edge,Β 
dropping down to the ground at the stern of the boat. From the outside theΒ hatch was visible and it had a length of rope dangling from it. He shook hisΒ head, puzzled, and made his way along the side of the boat. A third of theΒ way along, he came to a plank running vertically up the side of the boat. HeΒ held the candle nearer to it, lifting the hat slightly with his other handΒ to let more light shine on the hull. This plank seemed to be bolted to theΒ plank inside the hull as if to ensure the strain was spread across more ofΒ the timbers. He looked at them carefully. They were freshly nailed, but theΒ more he looked at them, the more incredulous he became.
He then looked round the dry dock. Stacked against the side of the dockΒ there were some more planks. These had obviously come off the side of aΒ 
boat; you could see the nail holes where they’d been fastened on. Now itΒ wasn’t uncommon for a boatyard to replace ships timbers, but these were inΒ excellent condition. They’d obviously been taken off the hull and replacedΒ by wood in a very poor condition. At this point, Benor remembered what he’dΒ heard about the yard buying a lot of very poor quality second-hand timber.
The only thing that made sense was an insurance fraud. The crew could waitΒ until they were out at sea; get all sails set and then abandon ship. TheyΒ would then pull on the rope at the back of the boat so that the drogueΒ deployed and very rapidly this would put too much strain on the hull andΒ would tear in two large areas of planking. Benor guessed that the waterΒ pouring in through the great gaps in the hull would sink the boat withinΒ minutes. He stopped and thought about it. It was a bit fussy and involved aΒ lot of planning, but there again; it could be done perfectly safely by theΒ person doing it.
He continued along the side of the boat. At the bow was a nameplate. HeΒ raised the candle to illuminate it. The Flower of Partann.
A shout from somewhere in the yard brought him back to the present.Β 
Somewhere out there was Faldon who needed help. Swiftly Benor snuffed outΒ the candle and climbed the damaged ladder, avoiding the broken rungs. ThereΒ were raised voices and angry shouting near the gate. He couldn’t imagineΒ 
Mutt could have got Faldon to the gate on his own, so he made his way backΒ towards the way they’d come in. He’d not passed the second pile of timberΒ 
before he heard a soft voice saying, β€œBenor, this way.”
He ducked down behind the woodpile. Faldon lay there waiting for him. β€œMuttΒ 
has gone to get Tallis; he reckons it’ll take two of you to move me anyΒ 
distance.”
β€œHow’s the ankle?”
β€œProbably broken.”
β€œRight, so which way will Tallis come?”
β€œMutt said to go to the hole we came in through.”
”Right, I’ll try and get you there.”
Benor helped the other man to his feet and Faldon threw an arm over Benor’sΒ shoulders. The priest’s inability to put his left foot on the ground slowedΒ them considerably, and Benor kept looking over his shoulder towards the mainΒ entrance. β€œI hope Mutt got away.”
”He said there were other holes he could get through.”
As he glanced back, Benor could see light moving in their vague direction.”
β€œDown, we’ll have to crawl this bit.”
On hands and knees they made their way behind the pile of timber screeningΒ 
the hole in the fence.
A voice shouted, β€œRight, now search this bluidy yard properly. Cover everyΒ 
bluidy inch of it. That kid must be somewhere and he probably wasn’t alone.”
For the next half hour Benor watched the lights working methodically aroundΒ 
the boatyard. More lights appeared as reinforcements were called in.
β€œI think I better help you through the hole.”
β€œWhat about Tallis?”
Benor bit his tongue and then said, β€œTallis can look after himself. If theΒ 
worst comes to the worst I can get you down to the Estuary and into theΒ 
water.”
β€œI’ve never tried swimming with a broken ankle.”
β€œThere’s a first time for everything. Don’t worry, I can support you and we’llΒ 
let the current carry us away from here.”
β€œWhere will it take us?”
β€œThat’s just an embarrassing detail; away from here is the important bit.”
Faldon fell silent and Benor helped him wiggle through the hole. Then onΒ 
hands and knees they continued down the narrow lane towards the beach. ByΒ 
the water’s edge Benor said quietly, β€œI’ll go back to the hole. If TallisΒ 
gets here soon we might be able to go with him.”
Benor stood in the dark for what seemed like hours. The searchers wereΒ 
getting closer, at some point they would reach the hole in the fence. ThenΒ 
he heard another noise, footsteps. Somebody was coming down the lane. In theΒ 
gloom he could see several men who appeared to be carrying something. AheadΒ 
of them was Tallis. β€œWhere are you Benor?”
Benor hissed, β€œKeep your bluidy voice down.”
Tallis turned round. β€œWe’re here. Put the chair down.”
He turned back to Benor, β€œWhere’s the casualty.”
Silently Benor pointed down the lane to the estuary. Tallis nodded, β€œThisΒ 
way chaps.”
Benor looked on with astonishment as a two-person sedan chair with fourΒ 
chairmen made their way past him. He would have sworn that a lady smiled atΒ 
him out of the window. He grabbed Tallis. β€œWhat in the forty-seven hells isΒ 
going on?”
β€œMutt found me at the house of the Widow Handwill. It was she who pointedΒ 
out that a sedan chair was the obvious mode of transport, and that theΒ 
presence of a lady would help maintain decorum.”
β€œWill it?” Benor asked, his tone indicating disbelief.
β€œIf not, the presence of four sturdy chairmen will,” said Tallis with an airΒ 
of absolute confidence. β€œAnd then there’s Mutt.”
β€œWhy, what’s he doing?”
β€œA diversion, listen.” There were shouts from in the boatyard. Benor duckedΒ 
down and looked through the hole. There were flames at the far end nearΒ 
where he’d assumed the offices were. β€œHe’s set fire to something?”
The sedan chair came back past them, the bearers were grinning. Benor sawΒ 
two faces smiling at him through the window. β€œComing?” Asked Tallis, β€œor doΒ 
you want to spend the night here?”

I’m sure you’ll all agree that was a fantastic story! But what about the book, time for Jim’s input…

Jim Webster
Here’s the man, himself!

I’ve thought long and hard about blog tours. I often wonder how muchΒ somebody reading a book wants to know about the author. After all, I as aΒ 
writer have gone to a lot of trouble to produce an interesting world for myΒ characters to frolic in. Hopefully, the characters and their story pull the
reader into the world with them. So does the reader really want me tamperingΒ with the fourth wall to tell them how wonderful I am? Indeed given theΒ number of film stars and writers who have fallen from grace over the years,Β 
perhaps the less you know about me the better?
Still, ignoring me, you might want to know a bit about the world. Over theΒ 
years I’ve written four novels and numerous novellas set in the Land of theΒ 
Three Seas and a lot of the action has happened in the city of Port Naain.Β 
They’re not a series, they’re written to be a collection, so you can readΒ 
them in any order, a bit like the Sherlock Holmes stories in that regard.
So I had a new novella I wanted to release. β€˜Swimming for profit andΒ 
pleasure.’ It’s one of the β€˜Port Naain Intelligencer’ collection and IΒ 
decided I’d like to put together a blog tour to promote it. But what sort of tour? Then I had a brainwave. I’d get bloggers who know Port Naain to sendΒ me suitable pictures and I’d do a short story about that picture. It wouldΒ be an incident in the life of Benor as he gets to know Port Naain.
Except that when the pictures came in it was obvious that they linkedΒ together to form a story in their own right, which is how I ended up writingΒ one novella to promote another! In simple terms, it’s a chapter with eachΒ picture. So you can read the novella by following the blogs in order. ThereΒ is an afterword which does appear in the novella that isn’t on the blogs,Β 
but it’s more rounding things off and tying up the loose ends.
Given that the largest number of pictures was provided by a lady of myΒ 
acquaintance, I felt I had to credit her in some way.
So the second novella I’m releasing is β€˜The plight of the Lady Gingerlily.’ 
It too is part of the Port Naain Intelligencer collection.

So we have β€˜Swimming for profit and pleasure’

Benor learns a new craft, joins the second-hand book trade, attempts to rescue a friend and awakens a terror from the deep. Meddling in the affairs of mages is unwise, even if they have been assumed to be dead for centuries.

And we have β€˜

The Plight of the Lady Gingerlily

No good deed goes unpunished. To help make ends meet, Benor takes on a few small jobs, to find a lost husband, to vet potential suitors for two young ladies, and to find a tenant for an empty house. He began to feel that things were getting out of hand when somebody attempted to drown him.

Find Jim’s blog: http://jandbvwebster.wordpress.com/

And his Amazon author page here.

The Big Reread Has Commenced #AmWriting #AmRereading #AmCringing

Well, some told me to leave it ages, up to three-six months, before rereading my baby. Others said get right on it. By the time you are ready to reread from the start, it will have been a while since you began anyway.

#AmWriting new

Updated this too!

I decided to take the middle road, and it’s been around three weeks.

Yesterday, I took to my printout with pencils and post-its, and read the first few chapters…

Sonu Singh was at the ready to help me along.

And it really struck me, as I read, just how much my writing has come along since I started this project 18 years ago.

Sure the ideas are good (I think) and the characters are forming, but some of the writing!

Wow!

It’s clumsy and repetitive in places.

I didn’t know exactly how much I used the words actually and really in my manuscript, and that was the first three chapters!

But at least I’m looking at it with a more mature head now, and hopefully, I can rectify these issues.

I need to use this reread to find silly errors and plot holes and make copious notes about what needs rewriting… EEK!!!

And even though I’m not remotely at the stage where I will be ready to publish anything, I started wondering what the cover could look like.

#ProcrastiQueen – yes I believe that may be me!

This is what I came up with…

Mock Up cover

The bangles have some significance which you find out as you read the story…

I’ve been looking into the whole self vs. traditional publishing thing too, and researched agents… It’s a bit mad!

I’ve had quotes for editing/formatting too if I was to go down the ‘self’ route, and I have had some wonderful offers from great friends, to help along the way.

Once I do this mammoth reread and first change around, my next step will be beta readers.

I need to know if this is WOW! enough to even go down the agent/traditional route. Or if I get decent feedback, whether to push myself on the self-publishing route. Or if it is truly awful, and needs a lot more work!

This whole writing journey is a long and winding one, and I hope you are enjoying following it with me, Peeps! Your input has been invaluable so far!

In case you didn’t get it before, the prospective blurb is:

Aashi’s life was all set.
Or so she thought.
After finding out her fiancΓ© was not the man she thought, she vows to put him, and her innocence behind her.
Accompanied by her brothers and best friend, she embarks upon an enlightening journey, where memories created and new relationships forged, have far-reaching effects.

I will also need to work on a synopsis too!!

This whole writing journey is a long and winding one, and I hope you are enjoying following it with me, Peeps! Your input has been invaluable so far!

#RiNoWriMo – The Finale! #canidothis ? #ididit !

Can you believe it? I completed a whole month of writing my WIP? (Along with blogging, and being wife and mother!)
#RiNoWriMo

It’s Bank Holiday on Monday… I appear to have promised to take the kids swimming one one day… and those damn uniforms refuse to label themselves… Β Can I get this WIP nearer the finished end??

Day 28

I am seriously exhausted. I am not sure if I can write any more for a while… My brain feels like it’s turned to mush. And I need to get rested for back to school… will I be able to get myself to the computer?

Hell Yes!

An hour and did a few more words. Then took the army swimming!

Word Count: 1139

Day 29

I’m definitely in a writers funk. I finished a section that I absolutely loved writing last week. The words just flew! Now I know what I want to happen, but I can’t find that smooth path to sail across, to get the story finished. It was hard, but, despite still feeling tired, I managed another few words. I’m not pushing myself… I want this to flow…

Word Count: 1007

Day 30

Thought I wouldn’t be able to do this today. I had to get up early and drop the kids off to my in laws as I needed a blood test done first thing. Feeling tired after having to wake earlier than my body was usedΒ to, was a trying time.

But once I got home, and full of a renewed energy. I managed to write, and then looked at a weekly tarot post by my friend Traci York. The cards I am drawn to are surprisingly accurate for my situations at the time,Β and today was no different!

Β Knight of Pentacles
Keep your focus.Β You were so excited and full of energy when you took the first step on your new journey. Now you feel like you’ve lost your steam, and all you’re doing is trudging along, without getting any closer to your goal. Don’t give up hope! Stick to your plan, stay focused on the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, and remember whatΒ Amelia Earhart said – β€œThe most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity.”

Thanks, Traci! I am staying focused! But taking it a little slower!!!!

Word Count: 1241

Day 31

The last official day of #RiMoWriMo.

I never thought I would make it to the end! I haven’t even eaten breakfast yet, you know!

When I say the end, I don’t mean of my first draft. No, The end of the month! The story is a little while away from finishing, but it is so close, I can smell it!

I’ve got a busy day ahead of me, those name tapes aren’t going to fix themselves, and then I have to get the boy to cricket training, and a well-deserved meal out with my ladies tonight meant I wanted to give my last writing day a good goΒ before starting everything else.

So I wrote…

Word Count: 1156

Β PHEW!!!!! I’m done!!!!!!!!!

Taking everything into account this means I wrote 4,543 words this week, and the #RiNoWriMo word count stands at

55922 words in a month!

What have I learned in this last month?

  • If you have determination and time, you can do what you set your mind to.
  • Writing can be really, really, really, REALLYΒ exhausting!
  • Sometimes time away from a story helps you put a totally different spin on it.
  • Support from some special writing friends, a furry writing muse and family makes a HUGE difference.
  • You need lots and lots of sticky notes and pens and notebooks… (great excuse to go stationery shopping!)
  • You can write anywhere if you want to.
  • NEVER GIVE UP!

 

My work in progress now stands at a few words shy of 70,000. When did I ever think I could write so much????? This has taken me a step closer to my dream of having a novel out there.

I will let you know when the #firstdraftwoes end and I have a complete manuscript in my hands. No doubt then I will flood you with questions and worries about editing, and proofreading, and editing, and rereading, and covers, publishing and promotion… but that is still a while away.

Now I am off to dream about the day I can conclude my story… whilst ironing labels on uniforms!

Thank you for staying with me on my #RiNoWriMo journey Peeps! Your support has been invaluable. Seriously. Mwah!

 

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