I’ve been featured! Thank you to Book Club Mom, Barbara Vitelli for approaching me!
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Musings and memories, words and wisdom… of a working family woman
21 Jan 2020 Leave a comment
by Ritu in Blog Tours Tags: Author, Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, Interview, Ritu Bhathal
I’ve been featured! Thank you to Book Club Mom, Barbara Vitelli for approaching me!
https://bvitelli2002.wordpress.com/2020/01/21/whos-that-indie-author-ritu-bhathal/

04 Jun 2019 46 Comments
by Ritu in Poems Tags: Author, Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, Poems for Writers, Self Doubt

Another poem inspired by Lucy ofΒ Blonde Write More! The fear of not being good enough.
Fear
Within
I just feel
Not good enough
For publication
Not able to compete
Or call myself a writer
No one will want to read my book
When others are just so much better
I think I should just delete the whole lot
Ritu 2019
It really is that easy to end up feeling despondant, when you have worked your fingers to the bone, written thousands upon thousands of words, then you compare yourself to another writer.
Big mistake.
Stop thinking you’ll never be the next J.K. Rowling or Stephen King.
They were where you are now, once.
Dream of the possibilities and know that somewhere out there, your book has readers, just waiting for you to get it out there!
Now, I’m off to try and edit a bit more!

26 Feb 2019 29 Comments
by Ritu in Blog Tours Tags: Author, Blog, Blog Post, Blog Tour, Blogger, Blogging, Jim Webster, New Release
Today, I am delighted to host fantastic author Jim Webster as he is going on a tour of the Blogosphere for his new release, The Plight of the Lady Gingerlily.

Without further ado, I shall pass you over to Jim!
We shall start with a photo, and the story that was inspired by it!

Delicate work
A casual observer might have assumed that Benor Dorfinngil was in a good mood. He had a spring in his step and might even be whistling a merry tune.Β
There was good reason for his high spirits. Things were going rather well.Β
He had funds. Admittedly heβd ended up giving two of the ten alar coins toΒ
Shena, on the grounds that the costs entailed in purchasing a dress might well come within the definition of legitimate expenses incurred during the investigation. On the other hand, heβd been firm with Tallis. Benor couldnβt see why Tallis needed compensating for the strain of looking after innumerable grandchildren. Given that the alternative would have been accompanying Shena to purchase a dress, Benor felt heβd taken the easy option. Once sheβd accepted the coins, Benor had mentioned the name, SalatΒ
Wheelstrain, to her and Shena had, in good grace, promised to ask around.
Another of the coins had been broken into a most commendable quantity of small change and Mutt was using this to marshal his array of watchers. IfΒ
the two sisters left the house their movements were tracked and theirΒ
conversations overheard by a collection of inconspicuous and apparentlyΒ
innocent children. Benor had been surprised just how much activity MuttΒ
could command for a comparatively small outlay.
Now he was intent on seeing Faldon the priest. As Faldon had been the instigator of the inquiry, Benor felt that it was only right that he occasionally reported back on what had been achieved. There was the problem that Faldon was disinclined to support anything to unethical, but Benor felt he could gloss over some matters. There was also the hope that Faldon wouldΒ keep his eyes and ears open and might even have something to contribute toΒ
the investigation.
When Benor arrived at the house he found Faldon sitting out in the streetΒ enjoying the afternoon sun. Unwilling to accept payment for cutting the hairΒ of passers-by, Faldon tended to be paid in kind. Obviously, somebody had gifted him a bench of solid but inelegant construction, and this was set against the front wall of the house. Faldon sat on it, but when BenorΒ appeared, the priest moved to one end to allow the younger man space to sitΒ
down.
βSo how are things progressing?β
Airily Benor said, βI now have the two women watched by experts.β
βHopefully we shall be ready if she makes a move against the child.β Faldon shifted his position on the bench as if his comment had left himΒ uncomfortable. Then he changed the subject, βSo what do you know aboutΒ
Jorrocks Boat Yard?β
βWell, they bought a lot of very poor quality second-hand timber. Also itΒ
appears Minny thought it important that Santon handled the Jorrocks BoatΒ
Yard account for Raswil Muldecker the usurer.β
βWhat do we know about the yard?β
βIβd never heard of them,β Benor admitted. βBut then I thought to ask Shena.Β
They are one of the smaller yards. Old Yalla Jorrocks had a good name, his son, Belan, wasnβt a bad boat builder, but by all accounts, he wasnβt the cheapest and apparently you had to keep an eye on him or corners were cut.Β
Of the current generation, Ardal is in charge and he is, apparently, theΒ person to go to if youβre planning an insurance swindle or want something
doing that isnβt particularly legal. The smugglers tend to deal with him.β
Faldon asked, βSo would it be worth having a look at the yard?β
βIt could be. But I doubt theyβd welcome casual visitors. I suspect Iβd haveΒ
to look round at night.β
Hesitantly Faldon asked, βWould you like me to come with you?β
Surprised Benor said, βCertainly, itβs good to have support, but it didnβtΒ
strike me as the sort of thing youβd want to get involved in.β
βIβm feeling a bit guilty,β Faldon admitted. βI dumped this job on you andΒ
havenβt really done a lot to help.β
βFair enough. If Mutt can spare the time Iβll get him to come as well. TodayΒ
has been overcast so it looks like weβll get a dark night.β
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The night was as dark as Benor hoped. Mutt met them just outside the yard.Β
Heβd insisted on doing a private reconnaissance first. When they met he ledΒ them down a narrow lane between two boatyards leading to the estuary. TheΒ yards on either side of the lane had tall fences made of a mixture of secondΒ and third-hand timber; in various states of decay. As they got close enoughΒ to see the water glinting in the estuary, Mutt stopped.
βThis bit is rotten; I got through. You two can follow me.β
Luckily both men were slender and wiry; a more thickset man would have hadΒ trouble. Still, by the time theyβd pushed through, the hole was noticeablyΒ larger. They entered the yard behind a pile of timber. Fortunately, it hadnβtΒ been piled against the fence, probably because it was unlikely that theΒ fence could support the weight. The three of them crept out from behind theΒ pile of wood and into the open. The entire area seemed to be a haphazardΒ collection of piles of timber looming out of the darkness. Benor led theΒ way. He could see something against the skyline which looked like a boat onΒ the stocks.
He stopped and listened. There was no sound, just the noises of the city inΒ the background. He stood up. Quietly he said, βI think we can walk. ThereΒ
doesnβt look to be anybody about.β
Cautiously the other two stood up. Mutt hissed, βIβll go to the right a bit,Β
see if thereβs any sign of anybody over there. Thereβs some sort of hut nearΒ
the gate in.β
Benor nodded and made his way towards the boat. Faldon moved off to theΒ
left, βThereβs a pile of something over here.β
Benor kept his eye on Mutt, the boy disappeared around a pile of wood, but
there was still no sound. He waited but the boy didnβt come back, so heβdΒ obviously not found anything. He moved forward and as he did so there was aΒ
ripping sound and then a scream to his left. He spun around and Faldon wasnβtΒ there. Hastily he dropped down onto his hands and knees to make himself lessΒ conspicuous and crawled in the direction of the scream. Suddenly his handsΒ touched canvas.
Quietly he said, βFaldon?β
From below him came Faldonβs voice. βDown here. I went through the canvas.Β
The ground here is stone slabs!β
Benor reached out, found a torn end, and tore it further so he could seeΒ down. Below him, he could see the pale blob of Faldonβs face. Mutt appeared
next to him. βWhat βappened.β
From below Faldon commented, βThereβs a boat down here.β
Benor explained, βSo Faldonβs fallen through the cover over a dry dock.β
βWell get βim out. Thereβs a hut over there with a light in the windows. IΒ
heard the scream, they might of.β
Benor reached down. βCan you grab my hand?β
Faldon tried to stand up. βIβve damaged my ankle.β
Benor tried to estimate the depth. βIs there a ladder, I donβt fancy theΒ
drop.β
βYes, just along there.β Benor tried to see in the direction Faldon wasΒ pointing. There might be something. He tore the rotten canvas and made hisΒ way in that direction. Yes, there was a ladder. βMutt, Iβll go down and helpΒ
him up, you catch him.β
At the foot of the ladder, Faldon was waiting; heβd used the ladder to haulΒ himself upright. Slowly and with Benor taking the weight, he climbed the ladder.
βGet on, someone coming.β
Benor put his shoulder under Faldon and pushed the other man out of the
hole. As he did so a rung, rotten with age, snapped and Benor fell onto theΒ next which also snapped. At this, he tumbled back into the hole.
Mutt repeated, βSomeone coming.β
βGet Faldon hidden, Iβll hide down here.β
βIf they find owt, Iβll let βem chase me.β
Benor looked round for a hiding place. His eyes were becoming accustomed toΒ the light. There was a boat here; perhaps he could hide inside the hull. HeΒ scrambled up the rope tied to the side, dashed across the deck and loweredΒ himself over the combing and into the hold. In there it was dark. He stoodΒ completely still and listened.
A voice said, βTelled you there were someone. The sheetβs torn.β
A second voice said, βBetter go down and look then.β
There was silence then a curse. βWatch the bluidy ladder, itβs knackered.β
βHere, stop moaning and Iβll pass you down the torch.β
Suddenly there was a hint of light inside the hull. Obviously, some of theΒ planking hadnβt been caulked yet so light was coming in between them. BenorΒ glanced around; he could make out the mast, seated in a block fastened toΒ the keel. He moved and stood behind that. From outside he heard, βNobody outΒ
here.β
βThen look inside the boat.β
βWaste of time.β
βWhy, had you got something more interesting planned? Look inside the boat.β
Benor heard muffled cursing then there was the sound of booted feet on theΒ deck above him. Suddenly there was light streaming in through the hatch.Β
Benor pressed himself against the mast. Now with more illumination, he couldΒ see something strange at the stern of the boat. There was some sort of box.
From outside a voice said, βWell are you going in?β
βIf I am you can bluidy well come up here and hold the ladder.β
Benor looked around desperately for a better place to hide. The box at theΒ stern was the only possible place. He made his way carefully to the stern.Β
He paused briefly. There were two large timber planks, curved to match theΒ curve of the hull. There was one on the port side, another to starboard, andΒ they appeared to be fastened to the timbers of the hull. For some reason, theΒ two planks were linked, across the hold, by a rope. Benor carefully stepped over it. It appeared to be bar-tight.
Then he saw that running from this rope was another rope which led unto the box. Hastily Benor ducked under the second rope and climbed up into the box.Β
It appeared to be full of canvas. Frantically he burrowed into it and layΒ there. Now whoever was holding the light was obviously in the hold. BenorΒ could see it coming in through the gaps between the planks of the box.
βStill see nowt.β
A third voice said, βWell happen itβs because thereβs nowt to see.β
The second voice replied. βThen stop wasting time and let us search the restΒ
of the yard.β
The light grew dimmer. Benor lay utterly still in the darkness. He listenedΒ to men cross the deck and drop down onto the ground. He then heard somebodyΒ cursing the broken rungs of the ladder and finally he was alone in theΒ silent darkness. He lay there, still listening; in the far distance he couldΒ hear voices but couldnβt make out the words. Carefully he pulled a stub ofΒ candle out of his belt pouch. Then he took a match out of its tin and withΒ the small pliers provided by the manufacturer, crushed the bulb at the endΒ of the match. It flared into flame and he hastily lit the candle. Then heΒ looked around.
He found himself lying on neatly folded canvas in a box that was comfortablyΒ large enough to hold him and the canvas. When he looked, the back of the boxΒ was the stern of the boat, but it seemed to be hinged. Why would you want toΒ get out of a boat under the waterline? Also, why was there a rope sewn to theΒ canvas and disappearing out through a hole in the hatch?
Was it a drogue to slow the boat down or assist steering?
He climbed out of the box and lowered himself onto the bottom of the hold.Β
He stepped over the taut robes. If the drogue was released into the water,Β
it would pull on the cross rope, but the planks fastened to the sides of theΒ hull would take the strain. That didnβt make a lot of sense. If asked toΒ build something like this, heβd have fastened it to the keel, or even to theΒ block in which the mast was seated. These were more substantial pieces ofΒ wood, and capable of taking the strain.
He made his way to the entrance hatch. He climbed up the ladder and onto theΒ deck, shielding his candle with his hat lest the light be seen from outside.Β
He walked silently across the deck and lowered himself over the edge,Β
dropping down to the ground at the stern of the boat. From the outside theΒ hatch was visible and it had a length of rope dangling from it. He shook hisΒ head, puzzled, and made his way along the side of the boat. A third of theΒ way along, he came to a plank running vertically up the side of the boat. HeΒ held the candle nearer to it, lifting the hat slightly with his other handΒ to let more light shine on the hull. This plank seemed to be bolted to theΒ plank inside the hull as if to ensure the strain was spread across more ofΒ the timbers. He looked at them carefully. They were freshly nailed, but theΒ more he looked at them, the more incredulous he became.
He then looked round the dry dock. Stacked against the side of the dockΒ there were some more planks. These had obviously come off the side of aΒ
boat; you could see the nail holes where theyβd been fastened on. Now itΒ wasnβt uncommon for a boatyard to replace ships timbers, but these were inΒ excellent condition. Theyβd obviously been taken off the hull and replacedΒ by wood in a very poor condition. At this point, Benor remembered what heβdΒ heard about the yard buying a lot of very poor quality second-hand timber.
The only thing that made sense was an insurance fraud. The crew could waitΒ until they were out at sea; get all sails set and then abandon ship. TheyΒ would then pull on the rope at the back of the boat so that the drogueΒ deployed and very rapidly this would put too much strain on the hull andΒ would tear in two large areas of planking. Benor guessed that the waterΒ pouring in through the great gaps in the hull would sink the boat withinΒ minutes. He stopped and thought about it. It was a bit fussy and involved aΒ lot of planning, but there again; it could be done perfectly safely by theΒ person doing it.
He continued along the side of the boat. At the bow was a nameplate. HeΒ raised the candle to illuminate it. The Flower of Partann.
A shout from somewhere in the yard brought him back to the present.Β
Somewhere out there was Faldon who needed help. Swiftly Benor snuffed outΒ the candle and climbed the damaged ladder, avoiding the broken rungs. ThereΒ were raised voices and angry shouting near the gate. He couldnβt imagineΒ
Mutt could have got Faldon to the gate on his own, so he made his way backΒ towards the way theyβd come in. Heβd not passed the second pile of timberΒ
before he heard a soft voice saying, βBenor, this way.β
He ducked down behind the woodpile. Faldon lay there waiting for him. βMuttΒ
has gone to get Tallis; he reckons itβll take two of you to move me anyΒ
distance.β
βHowβs the ankle?β
βProbably broken.β
βRight, so which way will Tallis come?β
βMutt said to go to the hole we came in through.β
βRight, Iβll try and get you there.β
Benor helped the other man to his feet and Faldon threw an arm over BenorβsΒ shoulders. The priestβs inability to put his left foot on the ground slowedΒ them considerably, and Benor kept looking over his shoulder towards the mainΒ entrance. βI hope Mutt got away.β
βHe said there were other holes he could get through.β
As he glanced back, Benor could see light moving in their vague direction.β
βDown, weβll have to crawl this bit.β
On hands and knees they made their way behind the pile of timber screeningΒ
the hole in the fence.
A voice shouted, βRight, now search this bluidy yard properly. Cover everyΒ
bluidy inch of it. That kid must be somewhere and he probably wasnβt alone.β
For the next half hour Benor watched the lights working methodically aroundΒ
the boatyard. More lights appeared as reinforcements were called in.
βI think I better help you through the hole.β
βWhat about Tallis?β
Benor bit his tongue and then said, βTallis can look after himself. If theΒ
worst comes to the worst I can get you down to the Estuary and into theΒ
water.β
βIβve never tried swimming with a broken ankle.β
βThereβs a first time for everything. Donβt worry, I can support you and weβllΒ
let the current carry us away from here.β
βWhere will it take us?β
βThatβs just an embarrassing detail; away from here is the important bit.β
Faldon fell silent and Benor helped him wiggle through the hole. Then onΒ
hands and knees they continued down the narrow lane towards the beach. ByΒ
the waterβs edge Benor said quietly, βIβll go back to the hole. If TallisΒ
gets here soon we might be able to go with him.β
Benor stood in the dark for what seemed like hours. The searchers wereΒ
getting closer, at some point they would reach the hole in the fence. ThenΒ
he heard another noise, footsteps. Somebody was coming down the lane. In theΒ
gloom he could see several men who appeared to be carrying something. AheadΒ
of them was Tallis. βWhere are you Benor?β
Benor hissed, βKeep your bluidy voice down.β
Tallis turned round. βWeβre here. Put the chair down.β
He turned back to Benor, βWhereβs the casualty.β
Silently Benor pointed down the lane to the estuary. Tallis nodded, βThisΒ
way chaps.β
Benor looked on with astonishment as a two-person sedan chair with fourΒ
chairmen made their way past him. He would have sworn that a lady smiled atΒ
him out of the window. He grabbed Tallis. βWhat in the forty-seven hells isΒ
going on?β
βMutt found me at the house of the Widow Handwill. It was she who pointedΒ
out that a sedan chair was the obvious mode of transport, and that theΒ
presence of a lady would help maintain decorum.β
βWill it?β Benor asked, his tone indicating disbelief.
βIf not, the presence of four sturdy chairmen will,β said Tallis with an airΒ
of absolute confidence. βAnd then thereβs Mutt.β
βWhy, whatβs he doing?β
βA diversion, listen.β There were shouts from in the boatyard. Benor duckedΒ
down and looked through the hole. There were flames at the far end nearΒ
where heβd assumed the offices were. βHeβs set fire to something?β
The sedan chair came back past them, the bearers were grinning. Benor sawΒ
two faces smiling at him through the window. βComing?β Asked Tallis, βor doΒ
you want to spend the night here?β
I’m sure you’ll all agree that was a fantastic story! But what about the book, time for Jim’s input…

Iβve thought long and hard about blog tours. I often wonder how muchΒ somebody reading a book wants to know about the author. After all, I as aΒ
writer have gone to a lot of trouble to produce an interesting world for myΒ characters to frolic in. Hopefully, the characters and their story pull the
reader into the world with them. So does the reader really want me tamperingΒ with the fourth wall to tell them how wonderful I am? Indeed given theΒ number of film stars and writers who have fallen from grace over the years,Β
perhaps the less you know about me the better?
Still, ignoring me, you might want to know a bit about the world. Over theΒ
years Iβve written four novels and numerous novellas set in the Land of theΒ
Three Seas and a lot of the action has happened in the city of Port Naain.Β
Theyβre not a series, theyβre written to be a collection, so you can readΒ
them in any order, a bit like the Sherlock Holmes stories in that regard.
So I had a new novella I wanted to release. βSwimming for profit andΒ
pleasure.β Itβs one of the βPort Naain Intelligencerβ collection and IΒ
decided Iβd like to put together a blog tour to promote it. But what sort of tour? Then I had a brainwave. Iβd get bloggers who know Port Naain to sendΒ me suitable pictures and Iβd do a short story about that picture. It wouldΒ be an incident in the life of Benor as he gets to know Port Naain.
Except that when the pictures came in it was obvious that they linkedΒ together to form a story in their own right, which is how I ended up writingΒ one novella to promote another! In simple terms, itβs a chapter with eachΒ picture. So you can read the novella by following the blogs in order. ThereΒ is an afterword which does appear in the novella that isnβt on the blogs,Β
but itβs more rounding things off and tying up the loose ends.
Given that the largest number of pictures was provided by a lady of myΒ
acquaintance, I felt I had to credit her in some way.
So the second novella Iβm releasing is βThe plight of the Lady Gingerlily.βΒ
It too is part of the Port Naain Intelligencer collection.
So we have βSwimming for profit and pleasureβ
Benor learns a new craft, joins the second-hand book trade, attempts to rescue a friend and awakens a terror from the deep. Meddling in the affairs of mages is unwise, even if they have been assumed to be dead for centuries.
And we have β
The Plight of the Lady Gingerlily
No good deed goes unpunished. To help make ends meet, Benor takes on a few small jobs, to find a lost husband, to vet potential suitors for two young ladies, and to find a tenant for an empty house. He began to feel that things were getting out of hand when somebody attempted to drown him.
Find Jim’s blog: http://jandbvwebster.wordpress.com/
And his Amazon author page here.
28 Apr 2018 50 Comments
by Ritu in #AmWriting, Thoughts Opinions & Memories Tags: #AmWriting, Author, Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, Blurb, editing, Publishing, Rewriting, Synopsis, Wedded Stress
Well, some told me to leave it ages, up to three-six months, before rereading my baby. Others said get right on it. By the time you are ready to reread from the start, it will have been a while since you began anyway.

Updated this too!
I decided to take the middle road, and it’s been around three weeks.
Yesterday, I took to my printout with pencils and post-its, and read the first few chapters…
Sonu Singh was at the ready to help me along.
And it really struck me, as I read, just how much my writing has come along since I started this project 18 years ago.
Sure the ideas are good (I think) and the characters are forming, but some of the writing!
Wow!
It’s clumsy and repetitive in places.
I didn’t know exactly how much I used the words actually and really in my manuscript, and that was the first three chapters!
But at least I’m looking at it with a more mature head now, and hopefully, I can rectify these issues.
I need to use this reread to find silly errors and plot holes and make copious notes about what needs rewriting… EEK!!!
And even though I’m not remotely at the stage where I will be ready to publish anything, I started wondering what the cover could look like.
#ProcrastiQueen – yes I believe that may be me!
This is what I came up with…

The bangles have some significance which you find out as you read the story…
I’ve been looking into the whole self vs. traditional publishing thing too, and researched agents… It’s a bit mad!
I’ve had quotes for editing/formatting too if I was to go down the ‘self’ route, and I have had some wonderful offers from great friends, to help along the way.
Once I do this mammoth reread and first change around, my next step will be beta readers.
I need to know if this is WOW! enough to even go down the agent/traditional route. Or if I get decent feedback, whether to push myself on the self-publishing route. Or if it is truly awful, and needs a lot more work!
This whole writing journey is a long and winding one, and I hope you are enjoying following it with me, Peeps! Your input has been invaluable so far!
In case you didn’t get it before, the prospective blurb is:
Aashiβs life was all set.
Or so she thought.
After finding out her fiancΓ© was not the man she thought, she vows to put him, and her innocence behind her.
Accompanied by her brothers and best friend, she embarks upon an enlightening journey, where memories created and new relationships forged, have far-reaching effects.
I will also need to work on a synopsis too!!
This whole writing journey is a long and winding one, and I hope you are enjoying following it with me, Peeps! Your input has been invaluable so far!
01 Sep 2017 84 Comments
by Ritu in RiNoWRiMo, Sonu Singh, Thoughts Opinions & Memories Tags: #ididit, Author, Blog, Blog Post, Blogger, Blogging, First Draft Problems, Furry Muse, Life Of A Writer, RiNoWRiMo, Sonu Singh, tired, Traci York
Can you believe it? I completed a whole month of writing my WIP? (Along with blogging, and being wife and mother!)

It’s Bank Holiday on Monday… I appear to have promised to take the kids swimming one one day… and those damn uniforms refuse to label themselves… Β Can I get this WIP nearer the finished end??
I am seriously exhausted. I am not sure if I can write any more for a while… My brain feels like it’s turned to mush. And I need to get rested for back to school… will I be able to get myself to the computer?
Hell Yes!
An hour and did a few more words. Then took the army swimming!
I’m definitely in a writers funk. I finished a section that I absolutely loved writing last week. The words just flew! Now I know what I want to happen, but I can’t find that smooth path to sail across, to get the story finished. It was hard, but, despite still feeling tired, I managed another few words. I’m not pushing myself… I want this to flow…
Thought I wouldn’t be able to do this today. I had to get up early and drop the kids off to my in laws as I needed a blood test done first thing. Feeling tired after having to wake earlier than my body was usedΒ to, was a trying time.
But once I got home, and full of a renewed energy. I managed to write, and then looked at a weekly tarot post by my friend Traci York. The cards I am drawn to are surprisingly accurate for my situations at the time,Β and today was no different!
Β Knight of Pentacles
Keep your focus.Β You were so excited and full of energy when you took the first step on your new journey. Now you feel like youβve lost your steam, and all youβre doing is trudging along, without getting any closer to your goal. Donβt give up hope! Stick to your plan, stay focused on the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow, and remember whatΒ Amelia Earhart saidΒ β βThe most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity.β
Thanks, Traci! I am staying focused! But taking it a little slower!!!!
The last official day of #RiMoWriMo.
I never thought I would make it to the end! I haven’t even eaten breakfast yet, you know!
When I say the end, I don’t mean of my first draft. No, The end of the month! The story is a little while away from finishing, but it is so close, I can smell it!
I’ve got a busy day ahead of me, those name tapes aren’t going to fix themselves, and then I have to get the boy to cricket training, and a well-deserved meal out with my ladies tonight meant I wanted to give my last writing day a good goΒ before starting everything else.
So I wrote…
Taking everything into account this means I wrote 4,543 words this week, and the #RiNoWriMo word count stands at
What have I learned in this last month?
My work in progress now stands at a few words shy of 70,000. When did I ever think I could write so much????? This has taken me a step closer to my dream of having a novel out there.
I will let you know when the #firstdraftwoes end and I have a complete manuscript in my hands. No doubt then I will flood you with questions and worries about editing, and proofreading, and editing, and rereading, and covers, publishing and promotion… but that is still a while away.
Now I am off to dream about the day I can conclude my story… whilst ironing labels on uniforms!
Thank you for staying with me on my #RiNoWriMo journey Peeps! Your support has been invaluable. Seriously. Mwah!

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