Sue’s Photo Prompt this week…
This just wasn’t fair, you know.
They always know how to find me.
I can’t help it though. Haven’t you seen the size of my belly?
I’d been fed up (again) of being ignored (again), so thought I’d run away (again). They were always busy with her, my sister. Ballet classes, horse riding, gymnastics… she always had all these great clubs to go to, because she was good at all these things. No, not good, but brilliant!
Tall, slim, pretty, with that angelic face and smile that melted all the hearts who encountered it.
The total opposite of me. Two years older than her, but 4 inches shorter, orthodontic braces to correct my overbite, and a rather rotund figure. I can’t help that though, whenever she didn’t want to eat something she would give it to me, and I, being the protective older sister, would wolf down her extras, so she didn’t get in trouble.
I didn’t realise until a lot later, how much of a mistake that was!
Still, I do like my food. At least when I go to college, I can forget her perfection, and indulge in what I am good at.
Culinary art.
Delectable cuisines from around the world…
Ok, so I’m doing a catering course.
They never complain when whatever I have been cooking graces the table, but aside from a flippant “Ta love!” I don’t get a second glance.
So I decided that I would do it. Run away, but properly, today.
There is no going back.
Well, there wasn’t, until that smoke wafted into the cave where I had painfully secreted myself…
The scent of a barbeque.
How dare they?
That was my speciality!
But you know the worst thing?
I could smell burning in that smoke! And they all know that one thing I can’t bear is good food being ruined.
I’ll just go and sort it out, it’s only one barbeque… I guess they deserved one more chance to show they care…
… and, well, I was kinda hungry!
ellenbest24
Dec 13, 2016 @ 21:36:22
i enjoyed this the way between siblings (I’m one of four) is fraught with contradiction and jealousy. A Cinderella moment all be it contemporary. A good write.
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Ritu
Dec 13, 2016 @ 22:07:51
Thank you Ellen! I’m glad you enjoyed it ☺
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ellenbest24
Dec 13, 2016 @ 22:10:19
As I often do Ritu.
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Ritu
Dec 13, 2016 @ 22:12:20
😚
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Hugh's Views and News
Dec 13, 2016 @ 18:07:25
Kind of reminded me a little of Cinderella, but yours is a far more modern version, Ritu. Loved it and felt her ‘second best’ feeling with the way you wrote it. Great writing.
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Ritu
Dec 13, 2016 @ 19:11:46
Thank you Hugh!!! Yes she was a bit Cindy like!!! 😊
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neelwritesblog
Dec 12, 2016 @ 17:21:15
i like your light pieces Sis. This one about some sibling who wears you down is so very relatable. Nice, inventice take on the prompt , Sis.
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Ritu
Dec 12, 2016 @ 18:47:17
Thanks bhai!!!
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Mother Willow
Dec 11, 2016 @ 04:59:55
creative, loved your story, feels so real.
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 08:50:56
Thank you Hèléne!
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Judy E Martin
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:18:02
I thought this was a really creative and original take on the prompt Sis and a story that I can certainly relate to! 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:23:01
Thanks sis! There is always someone, sibling or otherwise, who can get us down!
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Judy E Martin
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:28:43
Oh, I know! 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:33:32
😶 I have one such cousin
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Judy E Martin
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:37:39
I don’t know why people are like that!
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:39:27
She isn’t particularly attractive but over confident and able to make you feel like a pile of ****!!! I spent enough time with her to totally receive it…
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Judy E Martin
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:42:34
Oh God, she sounds awful sis!
You are beautiful inside and out and should never feel like that!
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 00:45:30
It took me a long time to realise this sis… some people just have that ability to wither you though… you know?
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Judy E Martin
Dec 11, 2016 @ 15:39:45
Yes I have come across a fair few of those types of people in my time Sis. 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 11, 2016 @ 15:44:34
😐😊
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Erika Kind
Dec 10, 2016 @ 13:11:48
Haha… so sweet and funny, Sis!
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Ritu
Dec 10, 2016 @ 13:16:27
Thanks sis!!!
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Erika Kind
Dec 10, 2016 @ 13:21:03
You are welcome 😊
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dornahainds
Dec 10, 2016 @ 01:38:30
Such a gracious example of self sacrifice for the greater good. 😉
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Ritu
Dec 10, 2016 @ 09:00:38
Of course Dorna!!! 😄
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willowdot21
Dec 09, 2016 @ 23:17:09
Lovely as always Ritu!! I hate that younger sister!
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 23:20:43
Thanks Willow… there’s always a ‘younger sister’ somewhere eh!
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willowdot21
Dec 09, 2016 @ 23:21:39
In our family it is me!!! 🙃
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 23:35:41
😁 you my dear, are wonderful!!!
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willowdot21
Dec 09, 2016 @ 23:56:24
Oh! Thank you Mam!!
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Ritu
Dec 10, 2016 @ 09:00:22
😙😙😙
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Sue Vincent
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:18:24
I really couldn’t see where this one was going, Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:21:40
In a good way? 😊
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Sue Vincent
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:22:45
Oh yes. I was expecting something far sadder and darker. I like this better. 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:25:34
There are days when I can’t write ‘dark’ even if I wanted to Sue! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😚
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Sue Vincent
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:26:51
Me neither…most days in fact 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:31:44
See… this is why we click!!!
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Sue Vincent
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:38:57
Yep 🙂
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:42:01
😄
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Miriam
Dec 09, 2016 @ 21:58:17
Liked this. You painted interesting and intriguing characters
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Ritu
Dec 09, 2016 @ 22:12:27
Thank you Miriam… just what came into my head at the time!
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