Matt The Book Blogger’s prompt for this week’s #FlashFictionForay.
This week’s edition will be on (drumroll please)… Kodaline’s Everything Works Out in the End. Feel free to base responses of anything to do with the song, I always enjoy any different takes!
It’s a song I hadn’t heard before, but here’s my take!
100 words of crazy, as usual!
Meet Bob, my fiancé.
And that’s Jill, my Maid of Honour.
Yes they are walking up the aisle.
Together.
Rewind to three hours ago.
I was having a breakdown.
It had dawned on me that it was Jim I loved, not Bob.
Jim, the Best Man.
Jill’s boyfriend.
Confused?
So was I!
And I was meant to be getting married TODAY!
Then Bob went all gooey eyed looking at Jill.
And she looked at him the same.
So we swapped places today.
Jim squeezed my hand.
Everything works out in the end, they say … I guess they were right.
curtisbausse
May 02, 2017 @ 18:50:13
Ha, ha, excellent! Lucky everyone realised at the last moment!
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Ritu
May 02, 2017 @ 19:23:00
If only things could be solved like that eh!!!
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thebookblogger2014
Apr 27, 2017 @ 20:16:45
Haha I love the light hearted take, that’s a very pragmatic response to a (somewhat pressing!) issue… Thanks for taking part!
Best wishes, Matt
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Ritu
Apr 27, 2017 @ 20:24:00
Thanks for the prompt Matt! You should know I err on the silly Lol!!!
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thebookblogger2014
Apr 27, 2017 @ 20:25:29
Well everyone enjoys a bit of light relief at the end of the day…
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Ritu
Apr 27, 2017 @ 20:29:15
True enough!!!
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Judy E Martin
Apr 27, 2017 @ 19:41:37
WEll done, Sis I love how you did thiis! 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 27, 2017 @ 19:52:49
Thanks sis! I had fun!!
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega
Apr 26, 2017 @ 02:49:24
Oh my!😲Way to flip things around. But it did work out in the end, didn’t it? Cool story and song.👏😁
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Ritu
Apr 26, 2017 @ 06:47:50
Things always happen for a reason… so they say eh Vashti!
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Becca Barracuda
Apr 25, 2017 @ 23:37:05
Clever idea! The first few lines caught my attention right away!
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Ritu
Apr 26, 2017 @ 06:46:48
Glad you liked it Becca!
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The Indecisive Eejit
Apr 25, 2017 @ 21:29:32
Well I never, that was a turn up for the books lol Nice twist, your mind goes to devious places young lady lol
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 21:33:03
Lol Thanks! I know.. . I do worry sometimes where it wonders to 😂🤣
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Erika Kind
Apr 25, 2017 @ 20:10:13
Haha! I love that! Life could be so simple 😂
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 20:10:53
If only eh sis!!! But that’s how you spin a tale in 100 words!!!!
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Erika Kind
Apr 25, 2017 @ 20:30:48
That would be a great challenge for solving difficult life situations! Tell the story with a solution with 100 words. That way you keep focused on the solution!
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 20:34:11
You’d have to be totally focussed if you were only allowed 100 words, it’s true!
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Erika Kind
Apr 25, 2017 @ 20:47:16
And how would the other person look like, if you suggested that … lol!
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 21:00:17
🤣🤣🤣
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willowdot21
Apr 25, 2017 @ 19:23:07
Fab Sis great story, great song!💜
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 19:23:56
Thanks sis!!!
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willowdot21
Apr 25, 2017 @ 19:33:46
💜💓💗
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ladyleemanila
Apr 25, 2017 @ 19:12:41
so cool, Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Apr 25, 2017 @ 19:16:03
Thank you my dear!
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