Child – #writephoto

Sue’s #writephoto prompt today

A freku for today – A poem followed by a haiku to sum the verse up.

Antique playthings
Once gave so much pleasure
Antique playthings
Surely things to treasure
Antique playthings
Memories roll back
Antique playthings
Dolls house and train track
Antique playthings
In an old nursery
Antique playthings
Looking quite freaky
Antique playthings
With eyes that follow you
Antique playthings
They know all that you do
Antique playthings
Bear witness to it all
Antique playthings
They see your rise and fall

These antique playthings
Valuable yet horrific
No comfort given

Ritu 2017

#writephoto

34 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. amaranto es
    Jul 05, 2017 @ 12:49:34

    Thankfully my antique playthings have gone by the board or are sitting holding their silence, you’d hate to think what memories they might hold….

    I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll.

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  2. DevBlog
    Jun 25, 2017 @ 04:35:05

    I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. .

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  3. nicholasjlennox
    Jun 21, 2017 @ 12:06:14

    I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. .

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  4. kenneth
    Jun 13, 2017 @ 13:24:14

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    I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll.

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  6. Michael
    Apr 30, 2017 @ 03:02:10

    Thankfully my antique playthings have gone by the board or are sitting holding their silence, you’d hate to think what memories they might hold…..great poem Ritu, enjoyed your response..

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  7. Judy E Martin
    Apr 29, 2017 @ 19:34:21

    i find some of the old dollies a little scary and clowns give me the real creeps!

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  8. neelwritesblog
    Apr 29, 2017 @ 03:30:12

    BEAUTIFUL imagery you have woven. Lovely poem, sis.

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  9. robbiesinspiration
    Apr 28, 2017 @ 16:24:39

    I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. Lovely response, Ritu.

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  10. Prajakta
    Apr 28, 2017 @ 14:49:09

    The haiku was needed to tie it up 🙂

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  11. Bernadette
    Apr 28, 2017 @ 12:13:47

    Ending is perfect especially if you are the other left to pick up and put away the play things😏

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  13. Erika Kind
    Apr 28, 2017 @ 07:15:20

    Haha, great haiku at the end, sis!!

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  14. dornahainds
    Apr 27, 2017 @ 22:22:57

    Beautiful!

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  15. Pamela Morse
    Apr 27, 2017 @ 21:47:21

    I like the summation…value found in exactly what??? This is a good and spooky tale

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