Sue’s #writephoto prompt today
A freku for today – A poem followed by a haiku to sum the verse up.
Antique playthings
Once gave so much pleasure
Antique playthings
Surely things to treasure
Antique playthings
Memories roll back
Antique playthings
Dolls house and train track
Antique playthings
In an old nursery
Antique playthings
Looking quite freaky
Antique playthings
With eyes that follow you
Antique playthings
They know all that you do
Antique playthings
Bear witness to it all
Antique playthings
They see your rise and fallThese antique playthings
Valuable yet horrific
No comfort givenRitu 2017
But I Smile Anyway... 
Jul 05, 2017 @ 12:49:34
Thankfully my antique playthings have gone by the board or are sitting holding their silence, you’d hate to think what memories they might hold….
I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll.
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Jun 25, 2017 @ 04:35:05
I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. .
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Jun 25, 2017 @ 09:17:04
🙂
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Jun 21, 2017 @ 12:06:14
I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. .
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Jun 21, 2017 @ 18:52:13
Wonderful 😊
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Jun 13, 2017 @ 13:24:14
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I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll.
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Jun 13, 2017 @ 16:49:07
Wonderful!
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Apr 30, 2017 @ 03:02:10
Thankfully my antique playthings have gone by the board or are sitting holding their silence, you’d hate to think what memories they might hold…..great poem Ritu, enjoyed your response..
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Apr 30, 2017 @ 08:36:32
Thank you Michael!
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Apr 29, 2017 @ 19:34:21
i find some of the old dollies a little scary and clowns give me the real creeps!
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Apr 29, 2017 @ 19:38:01
The full on heeby jeebees!!!
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Apr 29, 2017 @ 03:30:12
BEAUTIFUL imagery you have woven. Lovely poem, sis.
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Apr 29, 2017 @ 09:07:13
Thank you Bhai!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 16:24:39
I love antique playthings and have a whole collection of doll. Lovely response, Ritu.
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 17:00:53
Thank you Robbie!!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 14:49:09
The haiku was needed to tie it up 🙂
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 15:45:40
Thsnks Prakakta!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 16:22:41
Is your WP drunk?? 😂
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 17:00:39
Lol I think so!!!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 12:13:47
Ending is perfect especially if you are the other left to pick up and put away the play things😏
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 12:17:23
Very true Bernadette!!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 07:15:20
Haha, great haiku at the end, sis!!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 07:37:06
Thank you sis! Don’t you find old toys a bit creepy?
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 20:16:28
You think kinda “Chucky”? 😂 It is funny because a week ago I wrote a draft about old toys… I smiled when I saw your post, Sis! Soul sisters 😘
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 21:02:46
Lol! See!!! 👭 chick 🤣
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 21:08:18
We are amazing, aren’t we? 😂
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 21:09:12
Totally sis!!!
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Apr 28, 2017 @ 21:09:25
💖💖
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Apr 27, 2017 @ 22:22:57
Beautiful!
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Apr 27, 2017 @ 22:30:07
Thanks Dorna!!
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Apr 27, 2017 @ 21:47:21
I like the summation…value found in exactly what??? This is a good and spooky tale
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Apr 27, 2017 @ 22:01:01
Thank you Pamela…I find old toys rather creepy!
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