Feeling poetical…
We talk about life like seasons
Those different stages of life
The spring being our childhood
Summer, settled with husband or wife
Autumn comes bringing changes
Then winter creeps up on us all
It’s in our hands, our legacy
Do we leave smiles or tears that will fall?But recently the seasons
Have not conformed too well
The fresh spring being frozen
The summer a fiery hell
And autumn, well thats still a muddle
Sometimes cold, sometimes hot
But winter merges within it too
Do we need woollies or not?And so it seems life is following
A pattern just as confused
Our childhoods seem to be shortening
It’s hard to keep kids amused
Adulthood creeps up on us quickly
Responsibilities turning up heat
Some live a life of luxury
Others scamble for food to eatMidlife crises and changes
Creep upon us before we know
Even our ladygardens showing
Early sprinkles of ‘snow’!
And the winter, oh the winter
Lasts longer than before
Longer lives, better health, more resources
A blessing or a chore?Life is not meant to be simple
Not always going to plan
And so we should remember
To take opportunity where we can
Do all the things you want to
Work, write, travel, cook, dance, sing
Don’t let your winter arrive
Having not done anythingRitu 2018
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Feb 08, 2019 @ 06:32:23
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anovicescribe
Nov 28, 2018 @ 11:31:25
Loved it. Beautifully written. 🙂 🙂
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Ritu
Nov 28, 2018 @ 12:06:40
Thank you 😍
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Afreen Qureshi
Nov 25, 2018 @ 12:42:59
Beautiful. Absolutely amazing!!
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Ritu
Nov 25, 2018 @ 12:58:21
Thank you ❤
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Afreen Qureshi
Nov 25, 2018 @ 13:01:01
You’re welcome! Please do check out my blog if you can! ♥️♥️
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tanishq
Nov 20, 2018 @ 02:28:37
Beautiful post…hope your next winter comes and goes in a jiffy. May prolonged summers be your destiny!
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Ritu
Nov 20, 2018 @ 07:15:39
Thank you 🙏🏼💜
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Angela Prendergast
Nov 15, 2018 @ 19:46:04
Love this. You have a unique style of writing. Can’t wait to hear more from you!
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Ritu
Nov 15, 2018 @ 19:48:36
Thank you so much! I just try to be myself!
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ForgivingConnects
Nov 14, 2018 @ 07:17:10
Ritu, this is wonderful. There’s so much I like about this poem. I especially love this line – it stood out for me:
Do we leave smiles or tears that will fall?
Thank you. 🙂 You are talented. Blessings, Debbie
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Ritu
Nov 14, 2018 @ 07:30:15
Thank you so much for appreciating 😍💜🙏🏼
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thereluctantpoet
Nov 03, 2018 @ 02:10:29
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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thereluctantpoet
Nov 02, 2018 @ 02:14:58
I loved this! Such wonderful truths so beautifully penned, Dear Ritu!!
xoxoxo
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Ritu
Nov 02, 2018 @ 06:47:28
Thank you! 😍
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Aimer Boyz
Oct 31, 2018 @ 03:04:49
Good advice. We get locked into habits and keep telling ourselves tomorrow, but our tomorrows run out. We have to do it all, while we can 🙂
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Ritu
Oct 31, 2018 @ 06:45:08
We do indeed! 💜
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Erika Kind
Oct 30, 2018 @ 20:59:44
Good poem, sis. Who said it would be easy? But it is worth to live it.
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 21:15:02
Oh it is indeed!!!!!
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Erika Kind
Oct 31, 2018 @ 13:44:20
👍
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willowdot21
Oct 30, 2018 @ 20:56:32
Life is all here sis 💜💜
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 21:14:36
It is indeed!!!
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willowdot21
Oct 30, 2018 @ 22:08:48
💜😉😁💜💜
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dornahainds
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:16:39
Such Grooviness. 😎🥀
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:48:07
Glad you liked!!!
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Susanne Swanson
Oct 30, 2018 @ 15:16:26
Love this!
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:47:53
Thank you Susanne 💜
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Annette Rochelle Aben
Oct 30, 2018 @ 14:04:15
BOOM! Nailed it. ❤
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:47:13
Lol thanks Sis 😍
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syl65
Oct 30, 2018 @ 13:42:02
This is awesome Sister! It feels like you have jumped from spring (childhood) to winter in the blink of an eye and we do need to do some living before winter settles in.
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:47:03
We really do Brother, or learn how Tony muse our winter years more productively as there are so many more of them nowadays!!!
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syl65
Oct 31, 2018 @ 03:35:40
That is something that definitely needs to be worked on.
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Ritu
Oct 31, 2018 @ 06:45:44
😍
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Darlene
Oct 30, 2018 @ 13:28:39
Absolutely perfect! You said it all in a few words.
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:46:19
Thank you so much Darlene! 😍
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Rebecca Moon Ruark
Oct 30, 2018 @ 10:55:50
Love it!
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 12:58:59
Thanks 😍
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chrisleleaddy
Oct 30, 2018 @ 10:49:15
Beautiful..
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 12:58:40
Thanks 💜
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@Kingharris2486
Oct 30, 2018 @ 17:20:06
Of course.. ❤
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TanGental
Oct 30, 2018 @ 10:46:58
Really very neat
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 12:58:34
Thanks His Geoffleship 💜
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Dan Antion
Oct 30, 2018 @ 10:11:40
This was very nice to read this morning. Let’s not rush the season.
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 12:58:17
Thanks Dan. Let’s chill!!!
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justmuddlingthroughlife
Oct 30, 2018 @ 08:45:33
That is really lovely. X
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 12:57:57
Thank you 😍
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foodzesty
Oct 30, 2018 @ 06:23:37
A lovely poem Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 06:54:53
Thank you Sophie 💜
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foodzesty
Oct 31, 2018 @ 07:40:51
You are welcome 🙂
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OneLife
Oct 30, 2018 @ 05:47:19
The first words I read since morning and I am sure my day is going to sail smooth. Wonderfully knit and beautifully expressed.
“Our childhoods seem to be shortening
It’s hard to keep kids amused” … so very true. I wish it all rolls back to the good old days ASAP. Golden were those days devoid of tech and unnecessary hassles in life. Loved these lines 😀 .
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 06:54:42
So glad you appreciated !!!
I wish for those days too… But with a sprinkle of what we have become too… It’s hard being a parent nowadays, but harder being a kid. 😍
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OneLife
Oct 30, 2018 @ 07:54:23
I feel the pressure these kiddos go through. They need more freedom and space to explore and just be themselves.
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 07:55:18
I think the pressure they feel is why we have so many more angry teens nowadays…
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OneLife
Oct 30, 2018 @ 07:57:02
Exactly! Society and changing times have actually tampered with their growth patterns and natural course. I am sure you are going to cover up the gap with your munchkin 🙂 .
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Ritu
Oct 30, 2018 @ 08:25:05
I hope so! It’s hard seeing it from a young age too as I teach the early years 🤪
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OneLife
Oct 30, 2018 @ 09:54:59
Hats off to you for shaping the young guns.
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