Secret #writephoto

Sue’s #WritePhoto prompt this week:

Can I tell you a secret?
Do you promise that you'll keep it?
Words I have not told a soul
Thoughts keeping me from feeling whole
Feelings trapped inside my mind
Oh, the words I have to find
This secret needs to be set free
Will you help unburdon me?

Ritu 2020
#writephoto

36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. willowdot21
    Jun 17, 2020 @ 15:50:52

    Very gothic Sis πŸ’œ

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  3. Sue Vincent
    Jun 16, 2020 @ 07:22:21

    It begs the question… how many secrets do we keep? Nicely done, Ritu!

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  4. OIKOSβ„’-Publishing
    Jun 14, 2020 @ 12:42:18

    Lovely made, Sis! Sounds like lyrics for a song. Michael

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  5. Jennie
    Jun 13, 2020 @ 14:21:44

    Well done, Ritu!

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  6. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Jun 12, 2020 @ 12:20:15

    It’s no secret that many feel this way

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  7. judeitakali
    Jun 12, 2020 @ 12:16:05

    Gorgeous response, so immersive, I almost replied, “yes tell me”

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  8. potatosandwich
    Jun 12, 2020 @ 08:27:25

    Some secrets… …are best left buried

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  9. robbiesinspiration
    Jun 12, 2020 @ 06:15:02

    A lovely poem, Ritu. Your book kept me up last night and I am nearly finished. A great read.

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  10. Yiena
    Jun 12, 2020 @ 01:31:31

    Sometimes we need that someone who is willing to stay by our side and help us open up slowly … πŸ™ˆπŸ’

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  11. uzzawal1911
    Jun 11, 2020 @ 21:26:49

    A Beautiful choice of words! Amazing work Ritu! πŸ™Œ

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  12. johnrieber
    Jun 11, 2020 @ 21:00:41

    Terrific use of words!

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  13. H.R Phoenix, Author
    Jun 11, 2020 @ 20:59:02

    Beautifully penned ❀️

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  14. Erika
    Jun 11, 2020 @ 20:51:50

    Everybody needs someone they can trust and tell everything. It helps to heal or to find relief.

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