Sue’s #writephoto prompt this week…
Sitting here
I reminisce
Think of all
Those things I miss
All those moments that
We shared
All those feelings
When we cared
What went wrong
I’ll never know
Yet watching the tide
Come and go
I’ll think
Of you
And our love
So true
That monument
Marks where we’d meet
The secrecy
Turned up the heat
But then you said
we had to stop
Our idyllic bubble
You made to pop…
You left me there
And walked away
But memories
Are here to stayRitu 2017
Pamela Morse
May 11, 2017 @ 19:55:04
memorial to lost love, good one!!
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Ritu
May 11, 2017 @ 19:58:56
Thank you Pamela 💛
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dornahainds
May 08, 2017 @ 17:48:18
Beautiful! 🌹😎
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Ritu
May 08, 2017 @ 17:50:28
Thank you Dorna xxx
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The Urban Spaceman
May 08, 2017 @ 14:24:56
Your poem complements the picture so perfectly! Wonderful, Ritu.
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Ritu
May 08, 2017 @ 17:47:18
Thank you so much 😊
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Helen Jones
May 07, 2017 @ 21:20:51
A lovely rhythm and sadness to this, Ritu 🙂
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Ritu
May 07, 2017 @ 21:32:53
Thank you Helen xx
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Bryan Aiello
May 07, 2017 @ 17:10:29
Might have overdone it on the word count :https://destinationwrite.wordpress.com/2017/05/07/timeless-birth/
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Ritu
May 07, 2017 @ 17:12:31
It was good! But link back to Sue’s post so she can read it too!
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Bryan Aiello
May 07, 2017 @ 19:44:33
I linked back with the photo credit… I think
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Ritu
May 07, 2017 @ 19:51:26
Ok cool!!!!
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robbiesinspiration
May 07, 2017 @ 16:40:48
This is a really lovely poem, Ritu.
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Ritu
May 07, 2017 @ 16:43:14
Thank you Robbie xxx
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Judy E Martin
May 06, 2017 @ 19:28:49
This is such a lovely poem Sis, full of wistful longing 🙂
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Ritu
May 06, 2017 @ 19:48:35
Thank you sus. The photo was so beautiful… hard to do.justice!
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Judy E Martin
May 07, 2017 @ 14:31:56
Well you did that and then some! 🙂
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Ritu
May 07, 2017 @ 14:33:01
Aw bless you Sis xx
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D. Wallace Peach
May 05, 2017 @ 16:59:13
Lovely take on the prompt, Ritu. A beautiful poem. 🙂
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 17:35:04
Thank you Diane xx
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The Indecisive Eejit
May 05, 2017 @ 08:12:16
Nice take, you’ve a knack for that protrudes lark 🙂
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 08:33:58
Lol thanks Juls!!!
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Michael
May 05, 2017 @ 08:00:54
Lovely reflection Ritu. well done.
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 08:33:46
Thank you Michael x
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Rajiv
May 05, 2017 @ 06:21:37
What you actually mean, is Obelix.
What is happening to you? You confuse Donovan and Ronovan.
Now, you confuse Obelisk and Obelix
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 06:53:24
Cheeky!
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syl65
May 05, 2017 @ 03:54:25
Touching words and write Sister!
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 06:52:47
Thank you Brother. It was a great photo to inspire too! Thanks to Sue!
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syl65
May 05, 2017 @ 13:57:17
You’re welcome Sister! Oh yes, the photo was great!
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Fourth Generation Farmgirl
May 04, 2017 @ 23:29:29
Love it, Ritu! This is so wonderful and moving. Beautiful photo as well. 🙂
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Ritu
May 05, 2017 @ 06:52:12
Thank you Tonya. Credit to Sue for a beautiful photo prompt!
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Sue Vincent
May 04, 2017 @ 22:30:23
A really beautiful and poignant poem, Ritu x
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Ritu
May 04, 2017 @ 22:35:48
Thank you Sue x
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Henrietta Watson
May 04, 2017 @ 21:42:20
A very good post. Thanks for sharing!
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Ritu
May 04, 2017 @ 21:48:45
Thank you Henrietta 🙂
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willowdot21
May 04, 2017 @ 21:36:31
Love this Sis, isn’t the photo fantastic and your words fit so beautifully 💖💜💝
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Ritu
May 04, 2017 @ 21:48:10
Thank you sis! The photo is indeed beautiful. I wasn’t sure I could do it justice!
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willowdot21
May 04, 2017 @ 21:49:33
You certainly did💜💝💖
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Ritu
May 04, 2017 @ 21:50:16
Bless you sis! Always make me feel good! Love ya! ❤
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willowdot21
May 04, 2017 @ 21:51:18
My work here is done then 💖💝💜 love ya too!
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Ritu
May 04, 2017 @ 21:53:51
Mwah!!!
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willowdot21
May 04, 2017 @ 21:55:26
🤣🤗💚💖
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