Obelisk #writephoto

Sue’s #writephoto prompt this week…

Sitting here
I reminisce
Think of all
Those things I miss
All those moments that
We shared
All those feelings
When we cared
What went wrong
I’ll never know
Yet watching the tide
Come and go
I’ll think
Of you
And our love
So true
That monument
Marks where we’d meet
The secrecy
Turned up the heat
But then you said
we had to stop
Our idyllic bubble
You made to pop…
You left me there
And walked away
But memories
Are here to stay

Ritu 2017



45 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Pamela Morse
    May 11, 2017 @ 19:55:04

    memorial to lost love, good one!!

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  3. dornahainds
    May 08, 2017 @ 17:48:18

    Beautiful! 🌹😎

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  4. The Urban Spaceman
    May 08, 2017 @ 14:24:56

    Your poem complements the picture so perfectly! Wonderful, Ritu.

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  5. Helen Jones
    May 07, 2017 @ 21:20:51

    A lovely rhythm and sadness to this, Ritu πŸ™‚

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  6. Bryan Aiello
    May 07, 2017 @ 17:10:29

    Might have overdone it on the word count :https://destinationwrite.wordpress.com/2017/05/07/timeless-birth/

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  8. robbiesinspiration
    May 07, 2017 @ 16:40:48

    This is a really lovely poem, Ritu.

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  10. Judy E Martin
    May 06, 2017 @ 19:28:49

    This is such a lovely poem Sis, full of wistful longing πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


  11. D. Wallace Peach
    May 05, 2017 @ 16:59:13

    Lovely take on the prompt, Ritu. A beautiful poem. πŸ™‚

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  12. The Indecisive Eejit
    May 05, 2017 @ 08:12:16

    Nice take, you’ve a knack for that protrudes lark πŸ™‚

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  13. Michael
    May 05, 2017 @ 08:00:54

    Lovely reflection Ritu. well done.

    Liked by 1 person


  14. Rajiv
    May 05, 2017 @ 06:21:37

    What you actually mean, is Obelix.

    What is happening to you? You confuse Donovan and Ronovan.
    Now, you confuse Obelisk and Obelix

    Liked by 1 person


  15. syl65
    May 05, 2017 @ 03:54:25

    Touching words and write Sister!

    Liked by 1 person


  16. Fourth Generation Farmgirl
    May 04, 2017 @ 23:29:29

    Love it, Ritu! This is so wonderful and moving. Beautiful photo as well. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person


  17. Sue Vincent
    May 04, 2017 @ 22:30:23

    A really beautiful and poignant poem, Ritu x

    Liked by 1 person


  18. Henrietta Watson
    May 04, 2017 @ 21:42:20

    A very good post. Thanks for sharing!

    Liked by 1 person


  19. willowdot21
    May 04, 2017 @ 21:36:31

    Love this Sis, isn’t the photo fantastic and your words fit so beautifully πŸ’–πŸ’œπŸ’

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