One Liner Wednesday – #1linerweds

For Linda’s #1linerweds challenge.

“Isn’t it amazing how words can tell a story, take you away into another magical world? Simple combinations of letters that spin a tale and enchant those who read.” – Ritu

As I sit here, during my self-imposed #RiNoWriMo, it really does amaze me how my words transport me into a different space… I have to bring myself back to the present, to feed the kids lol!

Now, I’m not saying what I am writing will be a best-seller or anything, (though I can hope!) but it feels wonderful to be really writing again!

Happy Wednesday Peeps!

Colleen’s Weekly #Poetry Challenge # 44 – #Haiku: HUNT & FIND

Colleen’s prompt words this week:

Hunt & Find

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Image from Pixabay

Life is one big hunt
Enjoy it to the fullest
To find happiness

©Ritu 2017

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Image from Pixabay

We’re going on a
Hunt for the Loch Ness Monster
D’ya think we’ll find it?

©Ritu 2017

Quick Question #RiNoWriMo

Hey all, yes, I am hard at work with my writing, honestly!

But I came up against a little barrier, and wanted to get your feedback on it.

In my WIP, as it is based on a Sikh family, to make it authentic, there are certain words or phrases that have to be written in the lingo Punjabi to make sense, if you know what I mean.

My dilemma is this,

a) do I write the word/phrase in Punjabi and then the translation in brackets after?

b) do I include a glossary, which means flicking back and forth to see what something means?

Or

c) do I have little footnote translations at the bottom of the page?

I like the brackets idea because it is kinda straight away, but worry that it would ruin the flow of the text or speech.

The glossary is fine in a physical book but on an e-reader, it would be more annoying to flit back and forth

And the last idea, I could just about format a book to include this, but I think an e-book would be a nightmare, as if you adjust the font to your personal choice, the footnotes wouldn’t sit on the right pages!

There are some words that are repeated many times so once they were introduced, I would hope that the reader got the translation, but there are some that will only be used once or twice…

All feedback gratefully received!

#RiNoWriMo

RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #160 Party&Enjoy

Lovely Ron’s Prompt this week:

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Party & Enjoy

Girl, Young, Child, Meditation, Nature

Image from Pixabay

A party for one
Enjoying my solitude
Balancing my soul

Ritu 2017

Concert, Crowd, Audience, People, Music

Image from Pixabay

Life is a party
It’s up to us to decide,
To enjoy or not

Ritu 2017

Enjoyed that party
Food and drink, music on tap
At others expense!

Ritu 2017

Tightrope Walker by Shaun Hume – #BookReview #BookBlogger #MondayBlogs

A while ago I was contacted by an author, Shaun Hume, asking me if I would be interested in reading one of his books. Ewan Pendle and the White Wraith. (Read my review here!)

It wasn’t a genre that I would pick myself, but as a recent convert to YA fiction, thanks to Shelley Wilson, I thought I’d give it a go!

I surprised myself. This Harry Potter-esque book made me want to go and read more of this type of fiction! (Sequel out, tentatively in October 2018!). Last week Shaun reached out to me with regards to another of his books, Tightrope Walker. It is another YA book, but different to Ewan Pendle’s story.

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The  official Blurb…

Hetta is a Tightrope Walker. A leader of armies. She has been one all her life. But Hetta has just turned thirteen, and there has never been a thirteen year old Tightrope Walker. Ever. Is she too old to do her duty? Is she too old to walk upon the field of battle and survive?

My Amazon and Goodreads review – ⭐⭐⭐⭐

This isn’t the usual type of fiction I read, but having really, and surprisingly, enjoyed Hume’s other book Ewan Pendle and the White Wraith, I wanted to give it a go.
Hetta is a girl with a lot of power for a child so young, having been blessed with a skill as a Tightrope Walker. No really knowing what she is able to do, she has been drawn into many battles, leading her army to victory.
What I liked about this was that we still don’t really know what she is, and the end of the story leaves you dangling, waiting to see what she finds out about her powers.
Lots of emotive language used to describe events and a cliff hanger ending to whet your appetite for the next instalment!

Get it on Amazon here!

 

 

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